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Author Name: FreeGaia 6 Comments
Date Added: October 12, 2005 20:10:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Garden Of Dreams

~Garden Of Dreams~

Sit in the Garden of Dreams,

And watch as the petals fall around you,

You will feel a sense of warmth and care fill deep within you,

And as these magical petals fill you with warmth,

You think of your greatest treasure,

And what was your greatest pleasure,

You smile to yourself.

Leaning back and lying down on the gardens holy grass,

Staring at the clear blue sky,

You slowly begin to shut your eyes,

Thinking of happy moments and times,

Lifting up your hands,

Reaching out for the warm air while thinking of your homeland.

Your soul feels soothed and your body relaxed,

Nothing can touch you in this domain

No one can hurt you in this vast plain

Fears are nothing to worry,

This is the Garden of Dreams

Author's Notes:

Okay this is more of a...shut your eyes and imagine kind,

I was sitting in the garden just a minute ago, and accidently feel asleep, and i dreamt being in a place with petals falling around me,

I dunno,

Please comment on my work,

Also if you could get an image of this in your head.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelic Light on November 12, 2005 07:16:38 PM Report
very nice poem! I can defidently picture this poem so peaceful. I wish there was a garden like that around my house ::sighs:: lol anyways you express yourself beautifully all in your poems that probably what I like most about them! Keep up the great work ^-^

~Angelic Light~
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 13, 2005 08:29:56 PM Report
Ryan~
I can imagine this place,very nice work!
Some pretty lines in this post.
I enjoyed reading,thank you!
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeJeff on October 13, 2005 11:23:52 AM Report
This is very good Ryan...
Impressive write.

Jeff
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on October 12, 2005 10:53:50 PM Report
Ryan, with your descriptions, it was easy to see the Garden...Super work....

Margaret..the Bag Lady
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 12, 2005 08:37:45 PM Report
Ryan: this is very peaceful and lovely. A very good write.

Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: TrialAnn on October 12, 2005 08:31:49 PM Report
Very lovely images. Nicely done.




 


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