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Author Name: Freeamylou 12 Comments
Date Added: October 13, 2005 10:10:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Cry For You

I cry for you. My pillow painted, cold teardrops weep,

A familiar smell, scented memories I choose to keep.

I ache for you. My heart burns, she’s sleeping right now,

Turn my head, smile sweetly, and find ways to cope somehow.

I look for you. My eyes hazy, focus slowly lags behind,

Walk steps unbalanced; reach out for a hand I do not find.

I gasp for you. My lungs empty, they’re now without cause,

Sunlight chases the horizon, stop, rewind and press pause.

I feel for you. My fingers tingle, touched on silky skin,

Perception is lost, abstract from the world we live in.

I scream for you. My words reflect, thoughts that lurk around,

Swept away, dazed, waves crash and I have drowned.

I die for you. My body limp, soulless shell been buried deep,

Deaths door opened, and I stumble, alone I take the leap.

 

Author's Notes:
to love someone you can never have is so damn confronting :(
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJosephInEgypt on November 21, 2007 06:27:35 PM Report
Wow,....this is an amazing poem.  Definitely one of the best I've read in a long time.  Good job! :-)
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 9, 2007 07:33:00 PM Report
stunning write..full of emotion..realy enjoyed reading this.

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 8, 2006 03:25:54 PM Report
I like the way that you just let your emotions run through this poem. Can;t wait to read more.
Great talented writer you are.A truly moving write.
Lubs.
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on August 22, 2006 02:56:27 PM Report
ouch, and wow.. your words made me feel so trapped and claustrophobic, it must be hard to live with holding it in.



Best of luck, Jo x




Comment By: PremiumGlata on June 27, 2006 12:07:13 PM Report

How utterly well I can relate to this one! There's nothing like longing so much for one that you can't have. I hope that all works out for you.


Hugs and blessings..Glata


Comment By: on May 24, 2006 05:15:07 AM Report
This Was Really Good I Know How You Feel !
Comment By: FreeMichael on May 17, 2006 09:33:26 PM Report
a moving write...
Comment By: FreeS on November 21, 2005 08:38:34 PM Report
i felt that one in my loins ... awesome as usual ...

p.s. i m back with a lot of new shit coming real soon
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on November 20, 2005 09:40:41 AM Report
Dear Amy-
This carries words of deep expression that
just scream out at the reader-
The depth of emotion sank into each lines
delivery of thought with feeling-
I liked it!
Hope all is well for you My Friend~
Best Wishes to you and Yours~
Peace~
James
Comment By: FreeAndy on November 13, 2005 07:48:45 AM Report
Ames, this is freaking awesome! I mean it! You speak of such longing passion! Beatifully done!
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on November 13, 2005 07:35:33 AM Report
To Ache and Gasp and Scream for Love hurts us deep inside
Your expression is astounding! Excellent write Amy!
Yours ....Fletch
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 15, 2005 05:39:18 PM Report
BEAUTIFUL! I really liked this poem and how you wrote it nice piece.




 


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