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Author Name: FreeGaia 2 Comments
Date Added: October 15, 2005 13:10:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Violent Night~

It was a violent night,

Older lads and drunken fights,

Girls were showing of body flesh,

Giving each man another sexual test,

Thick smoke filled the air,

With everyone wearing the new designer wear,

Sweet perfume of cannabis and Ecstasy took over the club,

Bouncers were ignoring their job,

Young children snuck it and danced all night,

This was the beginning of the violent night.

Early hours of the morning,

They all set of home,

More fights began to erupt,

And police reinforcements were called up

Drinking whiskey while singing to American Pie

This is the day someone would die,

This was the middle of the violent night.

The police came and arrested a few,

While some drunks took back a girl,

While the unlucky begun to hurl,

A young child who snuck in at night,

Sniffed the perfume and jumped up in the streetlight,

He began to sing a song that some lads did not like,

They grabbed him and beat him up,

This was the unlucky one to have died,

This was the ending of the violent night.

Author's Notes:

I need to stop letting my little bro on when im still logged on this site, he deletes all my new adds on purpose to annoy me >.>

Story of this write: coming back home on a late night on a bus, i saw a lot of drunk people, and a few people on the floor, and the one that got me was a teenager about 14 years old who was slumped on the floor.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLil' Emo on October 22, 2005 11:44:44 PM Report
awww. this is so sad.
Comment By: FreeKayley on October 18, 2005 09:48:59 PM Report
This is really good, you're really talented!




 


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