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Author Name: FreeGaia 3 Comments
Date Added: October 15, 2005 18:10:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Critic Friend Dedication~

My friend,

Told me to give up my spirit,

To quit writing and never smile,

That non of my poems meant anything to anyone,

And it was all a shame,

That I was just another dreamer

I turned around smiling to myself replying

Writing is what I like to do

And these words I use mean something to me

I will write till all the words erase from my mouth

No one ever hears my voice when I shout it out loud

But they do when I put it down,

And my friend my spirit will never be crushed

By harsh words you say to me,

And I am a dreamer,

Who will work for his dreams to become a reality

So my friend this is a poem I dedicate to you.

Author's Notes:

An argument with some one i knew, he told me nothing would help if i write but it does help, for me it does =)


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Comment By: Freebrianna on November 4, 2005 12:31:37 PM Report
what kind of friend would break ones dreams,what kind of person tell you to give up? they obviously dont know what its like to write,at least not for you. For me my writings are a best friend some one i can always talk to, and know they will always listen,always remember. no matter what i have done what i have said i am never ashamed to write it down. At least its out and not stuck inside torturing you.never stop what you love.
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on October 16, 2005 05:50:06 PM Report
You just keep on writing Ryan. Never let anyone tell you to stop. :o)Keep your spirit alive through your writing's my friend. :o) *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeNadia Basdeo on October 15, 2005 10:26:30 PM Report
hey hey u keep on writing hun...not everyone is blessed with the talent of being able to write poetry....enjoy ur talent and put it to full use!


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