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Author Name: FreeGaia 5 Comments
Date Added: October 18, 2005 18:10:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Till Its Done~

It will take you away

And keep you their

For all eternity youíll stay

Not leaving its sight,

Never getting into trouble

It will turn the world black

So you can never see

Never miss what you need

Usted no puede salir, no hasta lo es hecho con usted!

You donít need to drink

Nor eat or sleep

No exercise or friendship

Love isnít want you need

Just lay their never leaving†††††††††††††††††††††

The cold blooded creatureís side

Usted no puede salir, no hasta lo es hecho con usted!

It will take

Who ever it needs

It will never be stopped

Only one it needs

A creature of power

Hate and greed

Usted no puede salir, no hasta lo es hecho con usted!

Feeding on animal flesh

Or human we do not know

Taking freedom of body and soul

Avoid this creature at all cost

Or be the unlucky slave

For eternity in its darkened lifeless cave

Usted no puede salir, no hasta lo es hecho con usted.

You canít leave, not till it is done with you

Author's Notes:

Usted no puede salir, no hasta lo es hecho con usted! i think thats Spainish for (You can't leave, not till it is done with you) if i have this wrong tell me =)

Please comment!

~Ryan~

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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumsammie bagley on February 24, 2013 02:59:49 PM Report
lol i think i have to many questions and not enough answers because i don't no what the foreigner  language is saying but a good poem i enjoyed the read
Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on August 26, 2009 07:26:25 PM Report
Hey Gaia,

I wouldent want to be in the captured one's place....  Brrrr!  But never the less all of the chils which went over my back: i loved how you came to create this most enjoyeble piece of poetry!  Both captivating and entertaining.

Greetings: Peter Sammylin

Comment By: FreeJennifer on September 10, 2008 10:00:02 AM Report
creepy but I loved it. you achieved what your goal set out. I was pleasurably scared!
jen

Comment By: FreeJeff on October 19, 2005 03:49:56 PM Report
You are a impressive young man, and a gifted poet.

Jeff
Comment By: FreeLil' Emo on October 19, 2005 06:48:15 AM Report
This is an amazing write. I could visualize and feel everything

Chow, hon!
Laura ^_^




 


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