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Author Name: FreeGaia 3 Comments
Date Added: October 21, 2005 20:10:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~SAVE ME~

I need help

I cant think anymore

Iím scared of whatís happening to me

I feel so much love in this world

But then I feel so much despair

Anger is whatís floating in my blood

My veins full of blackness from down below

Save me please

I can be helped

I want to be helped

This life is becoming so unknown

Save me please

I have been cured so many times

But this disease comes back within its prime

I feel like emptiness is filling within this body

But my soul is keeping me free

It canít save me for long

I need help and I wonít deny it because that is wrong

I feel guilty when I feel down like this

Due to other peopleís life are more a drift

Is it wrong for me to feel like this?
Save me please

I thank you all

For your time to read

This ISNT my hour for need

Help others who truly need this help

For I will be fine, just stuck in a hole

I will find my way out soon

But please forgive me for feeling down

Save me PLEASE

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAbi on May 4, 2007 03:46:04 PM Report
heyy

your inbox is full so i thought i'd comment instead

ive been reading your poems and i have to say they are amazing

especially this one

wish i could write like you

xxx

Comment By: FreeKayley on December 22, 2005 07:31:19 PM Report
excellent write~!
Comment By: FreeNell on October 25, 2005 04:23:58 PM Report
I cannot say i have ever felt this way, but in reading this i cam vaguely imagine what it must feel like. Don't worry babe, i will always be here to lend a helping hand.A very touching peice.
Danielle xx




 


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