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Author Name: FreeGaia 7 Comments
Date Added: October 30, 2005 16:10:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Where Were You / I Was There~

Where were you?

When the world felt so cold

When this place grew too old

When life bored me and death was my only tune

Light was banished and I could only see dark?

When I had died?

Where were you?

 

Each heart beat you heard

Was not yours but mine keeping you close to me

Each foot print you saw

Was me walking a head of you to clear danger

Each time you cried

I would catch your tears

Every time you never felt loved

I always loved you

When you had a burden

I carried one so you wouldn’t feel alone

Every time you felt alone

I was right their,

You’re my child,

Every one of you are

Close your eyes and you will see me

Just always remember I will not be far.

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Comment if you can :D Be much appreicated!

~Ryan~

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Comments:
Comment By: TrialJason Starr on March 16, 2009 05:39:41 PM Report
God appreciates the fact that we are humble enough to use our gift of writing for Him, a blessing if you will.good write, God-Bless
Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 20, 2008 04:39:06 PM Report
This is an excellent write in very good taste.I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Lubs.

Comment By: FreeJeff on October 23, 2006 02:36:37 PM Report

Excellent write Ryan~


Shows alot of depth.


 


Jeff


Comment By: FreeMeg on January 29, 2006 06:07:52 PM Report
This is a really sentimental piece that simply sings with love. Heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing.
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: FreeAngelic Light on November 11, 2005 04:34:45 PM Report
wow your really good at writing! Don't ever stop I luv your poems! This poem is truly beautiful!! ^-^

~Angelic Light~
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 31, 2005 03:49:22 AM Report
Beautiful write

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeNell on October 30, 2005 05:03:35 PM Report
hey huni
Great write, its ashame that people cannot see how much they are loved.
agree with everything said
Love Danielle xxxx~xxxx




 


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