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Author Name: FreeGaia 2 Comments
Date Added: October 31, 2005 17:10:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Hour Glass~

W-atch the hour glass

H-ours, minutes and seconds away

A-s it runs

T-hat is now your soul dying out

P-icture each grain falling down

A-s your life slowly sinks into doubt

I-n your life you suffer and despair

N-ever wishing you were born, donít want kin to suffer your world

Y-esterdays tears are stained on your cheeks

O-ver and over again you wish you would die

U-nder pressure from work which is a nightmare

S-lit open wrists bleeding down on the floor

U-ntamed suicidal mind††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††††

F-ear of living

F-ear of loving

E-ternal sleep is what you really wish you had

R-est in piece with the grain less hour glass

Author's Notes:

Spells What Pain You Suffer

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~Ryan~

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelic Light on November 23, 2005 09:43:30 PM Report
Great job i wud never be able to write an acrostic with that many letters (and still have it make sense)! Keep up the great work!!

~Angelic Light~ ^-^
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 17, 2005 11:21:49 AM Report
Hi, Ryan~
Being almost those last grains of sands within that ol' hourglass, I can relate to this beautifully written piece~ It is melancholy, but is penned with great intricacy and care~ Well thought out, and there are many who would suscribe to the message~
Nicely done~
Margaret....the Bag Lady




 


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