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Author Name: FreeGaia 7 Comments
Date Added: November 02, 2005 17:11:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Imagine~

Letís re-write the bible

And turn it into the bible of fire

Burn down the skies

And live each day with murdering cries

Letís cover a holy ground

With blood laid all around

Rip open loversí hearts

And condemn them to a life of hurt

Letís take out there eyes

So they can no longer see or believe

Letís turn this world from love to hate

Burn the place to the ground

Letís turn the sea

Into a pollution of green

Hate is everywhere to be seen

Thorns in every plant

I hope I have put a vivid image in your head

Of pain corruption and fears of dread

But this is just an image you see

Of what the world

Could be

Author's Notes:

Okay i had no idea where to put this write, So i stuck it in rants/venting (Tell me which one you think it should be in) anyway the idea of this poem is to put an image in your head (i try and do that with all my poems) anyway Enjoy!

Please Comment

~Ryan~

Oh and id be intrested to see what image you got in your head! (if you do that is)

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJordie on April 28, 2008 11:29:48 PM Report
nice poem, i see the world u write about perfectly.

 

Comment By: FreeOlive on April 11, 2007 09:57:36 PM Report
I think thats the real image of the world today.
Comment By: FreeMeg on January 29, 2006 06:10:42 PM Report
I think the image that came to me was a dark world rife with blood and war, where even the skies rained red teardrops...a dreadful thought, and even moreso that that's basically the path we're heading straight for. Thanks for sharing. This is a potent write.
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: Freeloved by nobody on November 10, 2005 08:06:37 AM Report
I had a very horred,terrible image. I thought the world was bad now but that gives me another image to compare today to. Great write, I love it:-) *--Heather--*
Comment By: Freekfoil on November 5, 2005 04:07:04 PM Report
well written but i agree with Laura!
Comment By: FreeJeff on November 3, 2005 09:02:52 AM Report
Very vivid write Ryan,
I'm not sure the world you painted is one I want to stay around to live in.
Sounds Post-Rapture to me.

Jeff
Comment By: FreeLil' Emo on November 3, 2005 08:01:03 AM Report
I'm not saying this to be mean but...are you feeling alright? Reading this and being a pastor's daughter...well...it stuns me. But it's a good write though in a poet's view.




 


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