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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 19 Comments
Date Added: January 25, 2011 00:01:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Our Velvet Starry Sky

 

Our Velvet Starry Sky


 

 

Do you ever wonder?
When stars fill up the sky
And you are I live parted
Do you chance to reason why?
 
How destiny can deal this fate
When lovers hearts are tied
The moon aglow and aching
Our eyes fill up and cry
 
You look up at the stars each night
And I on my porch swing spy
The twinkling of a starry night
Our hearts n'er parted, but entwined
 
Then a  certain kind of magic
Envelops your heart and mine
Where our love shall know not distance
And souls can turn off time
 
We then shall take each other
Slip into a tight embrace
And whisper sweet devotion
For our love spans time and space
 
But as we close our eyes each night
Under the same velvet blanket of sky
We can only dream on moonlit nights
Two lovers, you and I
 
 
   
 
Author's Notes:

For the lover of starry nights


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Comments:
Comment By: Freenoah count on July 27, 2018 11:03:13 PM Report

Cindy dear, I never responded to this enchanting missive because I'm so shy.  However, enough time has passed for me to muster the courage to say thank you, so very much.  with much love, noah

p.s. It was for me, right? Please say so, or I'll get a gun permit if they overlook the felony bookmaking conviction, take some lessons, and shoot myself in the foot (probably just graze the pinky toe, but it'll draw blood).  On another note, I hope you're well and thriving.   

Comment By: FreeTimespell on January 13, 2015 10:08:22 PM Report

Nice...,

Descriptions are well expressed

10/10 I would say.

 

:O)

 

~T.S~

 

PS: :) 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 21, 2014 03:25:36 PM Report
This is very romantic and so lovely...Great writing, Cindy...len
Comment By: Freeken on October 9, 2012 12:39:33 AM Report
"Where our love shall know not distance

And souls can turn off time
"



You have shown here how desire

is a wonderful thing even in loneliness.



beautiful



ken


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on December 29, 2011 10:46:36 PM Report
What a breathtaking tableau.  A picture formed with words and great emotion -- I like this very much indeed. Thank you for sharing - - 



Alistair

Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 25, 2011 09:14:52 AM Report
here's the envelopment of souls and tight embraces - your talent continues to inspire and uplift as your words warm the spirit.  well done, ms cindy loo whooooo, but i couldn't expect anything less...

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 25, 2011 05:14:55 AM Report
Beautiful poem Cindy, unfortunately i stay in a place that's not very suitable for star gazing, can imagine it though, well done

Comment By: Freejamieson steele on January 25, 2011 01:22:10 AM Report


Cindy,


   Heartfelt


without regrets.




Jamieson

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 26, 2010 10:57:24 PM Report
what a beauty, Cindy!  your special warmth shines through the night and bridges the gap between lovers! as always, impeccable rhythm and rhymes!
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 6, 2008 12:02:08 PM Report
This is so breathtaking so very beautifully written words that whisper so passionate to the heart. Loved every wonderful word of it Your an excellent poet
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on April 16, 2006 01:13:21 AM Report
A starry night embraced with a dreamy girl. Yep, life don't get any better than that. Beautiful Write Ms Cindy Bendel!
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 15, 2005 10:36:57 AM Report
I like how you invoke emotions in this write by using the night, stars and the moon. It all ties together well and your rhyming scheme is not forceful, which is sometimes difficult to avoid.
Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on November 12, 2005 07:32:36 PM Report
Heartfelt love poem. Nice quadrants with endwords of line two and four rhyming in each quadrant. Well constructed.
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on November 11, 2005 03:38:05 PM Report
The poem along with the graphic's made this a very enjoyable read. good work
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on November 9, 2005 05:58:41 AM Report
This is beautiful. I love starry nights.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeDr Psycho on November 7, 2005 07:30:48 AM Report
One guy, who is apart from you, knows not how unlucky he is. He should thank his lucky stars to even be considered in the same wisp of clouds within your starry night.....good job Cindy and Henry.....Paul
Comment By: FreeMike on November 7, 2005 12:37:57 AM Report
Excellent write here. Love from the soul knows not time, or distance. Bravo

MIKE
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 6, 2005 11:58:54 AM Report
A sweet poem that shows the sadness of longing, you really did a great job on this one Cindy. I hope you and the one you are parted from have a great reunion. Henry
Comment By: FreeEdward Kent on November 5, 2005 05:17:28 PM Report
pics good poems better,,loved both ,,you are a poet and I know it,,,Eddy




 


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