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Author Name: Freewritelady 12 Comments
Date Added: November 05, 2005 20:11:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Million Tears

A million tears I cried for you,

a thousand times I waited,

and when my love was not returned,

twas your soul, my heart, it hated.

A hundred hugs I gave each day,

and many were the kisses,

but now that I am finally free,

it is me your heart, it misses.

And now, you come and say these words,

in action, thought and need,

but chilled I am, and weary,

and my soul pays you no heed.

A million tears now fall from you,

a thousand times you wait;

and when you see I need you not,

you fear for your very fate.

A hundred days youíll think of this,

and many times youíll sigh,

and cling to the question that has no answers,

forever asking why.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freekim on January 23, 2006 03:47:26 AM Report
knew this feeling....great write :)
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on November 27, 2005 08:39:55 AM Report
Your expression have brought my own tears.
Excellent write!
Yours ....Fletch
Comment By: FreeMike on November 13, 2005 08:14:25 AM Report
hey i like this! when the roles are reversed, and your opposite feels the pain he has put you through. this is a good write

MIKE
Comment By: FreeGlata on November 11, 2005 09:02:41 AM Report
Hey, Gal! Glad the shoe's on the other foot now, and not kicking YOU anymore. Like you seem to express, though, there's pain and sorrow coming through that the one that brought you pain is now one that is hurting.
Millions of tears, from who ever is crying them, are horridly sad...
Great job, sis...
glata
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on November 7, 2005 10:34:49 PM Report
I think this may be the poetic equivilant of a WWA smack down!It is a shame when people's passions are out of sync. The teeter totter of emotions out of balance is the most devastating on earth and almost impossible to heal. Such a heartfelt piece, Barbie, sad but so strong. _ jude
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 7, 2005 12:37:19 AM Report
What can I say that hasn't already been said? It is sooooooooooo liberating to finally find the freedom from tears and heartache...and as for him...he got wise a little too late. Oh well...too bad, so sad, I guess he knows exactly how you felt now! Well said girlfriend!!

~Barbara~ *cheering for YOU*
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 6, 2005 07:49:00 PM Report
Such a STRONG write, Barbie, and you sound as though you really deserve it~ Sad that things could not been seen by the other end of the relationship, and may your days be filled with hope and sunshine~! Karmic wheel, just keeps turnin' and turnin'....Ouch~! GOOD work~!
Margaret...the bag lady
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on November 6, 2005 12:24:56 PM Report
This poem brings an ache to the heart , along with some satisfaction that the tables can be turned to equal the misery inflicted, this was great Barbie, I know this came from your gut and I can sense a little grin upon your face as you see the inflictor hurting. Henry
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on November 6, 2005 12:21:07 PM Report
This...is...sad. But, life must go on. All the tears we cry, wash over our eyes and help us to see more clearly.

William.
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on November 5, 2005 10:00:47 PM Report
This so hits home. Oh why is it ALWAYS too little too late? I am sorry for the tears but they have needed shedding.
A wonderful emotional write. Filled with true care, and real power. Well done. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 5, 2005 09:00:53 PM Report
AS I READ THIS.. WOW.. A MILLION TEARS.. I MUST HAVE CRIED FOR A MERE MORTAL MAN??? WE ALWAYS ASK WHY??? I FEEL THIS PAIN..HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 5, 2005 08:49:37 PM Report
Now the shoe is on the other foot Barbie. You never know what you had until it's gone. Terrific write, Joe




 


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