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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 43 Comments
Date Added: June 05, 2009 09:06:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Liquid


Quickening;
alive.
Free.
You,
me.
Until
blood
is smoke,
and
I
am
liquid.

 

 


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 21, 2013 04:43:50 PM Report
Well i think that about rounds it all up!! Great poem....
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 15, 2008 12:24:25 AM Report

As a ‘minimalist’ I believe less is more.  You have confirmed this with your write.  Congratulations.


Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 17, 2007 11:15:35 AM Report
I responded earlier so...

Congrats on another award!

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on September 17, 2007 12:04:42 AM Report
I loved this then and still love now, your talent is wonderfully inspiring Jody!
Congratulations as always for a fine write~
Hugs,
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 16, 2007 01:06:45 PM Report
Ms S.S.:  super congrats on this Feature Poem Award -- very deserved.

 

Lady D

Comment By: Freeaaron payne on November 16, 2006 10:42:00 AM Report
wow, it read like a quick buring fire.  very good. aaron
Comment By: FreeChuck on November 2, 2006 03:19:16 PM Report

I wanted to post a brilliant comment from one brilliant writer to the next... and I got lost in a sea of chatter... if you write it... they will come.


Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on October 29, 2006 09:40:52 PM Report
So much in so few words.

Beautiful!

 

KeithRay

Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on October 28, 2006 10:30:10 PM Report
Jody - Well penned and well said.  

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on October 28, 2006 04:50:54 PM Report
Steamy and sensual in so few words.

Brilliant!!

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 26, 2006 12:15:07 AM Report
13 words placed together so well. You are Amazing!
Yours ..................Fletchj

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on October 25, 2006 06:14:39 PM Report
Say what?! (What!) Good one jolen!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on October 24, 2006 09:54:23 PM Report
I thought it was sizzling and sensual the first time I read it and my opinion has not changed Jody, definitely one of your best!    Henry
Comment By: Freetom on October 24, 2006 06:02:03 PM Report

excellent penning Jody this says so much using just a few choice words beautifully done


hugs kisses


tom


Comment By: FreeAngel on October 24, 2006 03:55:01 PM Report
Says a lot in few words, reminds me to put the bottle of wine in the fridge to chill lol. Excellent

 

Love Angel (who is still looking for those darn glass slippers)

 

Lov eAngelxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 24, 2006 02:31:47 PM Report
This is SO striking...  WOW...  You are doing things to words you know...  This is amazing my J...  Love it!!!!
Love you
Juicy Girl x

Comment By: FreeAsha M. Night on December 9, 2005 09:01:44 PM Report
I love the way you wrote this...it is like a small stream of liquid passing through someones fingers or liquid through a crack. Beautiful.
Comment By: Freejag on December 8, 2005 10:17:39 PM Report
Awfully good poem that i like because it's just a glimpse and thats all and yet it defines a picture in my head
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 29, 2005 04:59:34 AM Report
ably demonstrating the powerful effect of a few well chosen words to evoke feelings in our minds.
great work
Ali xxx
Comment By: FreeRichard Johnson on November 21, 2005 02:05:28 AM Report
All three compounds the same, yet different.
Thunder Wolf
Comment By: FreeSteve Sniukas on November 19, 2005 11:20:06 PM Report
nicely done! wonderful flow !
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on November 14, 2005 06:32:13 AM Report
This simplicty is pure elegance as your choice of words, critical in their selection, roots the premise. IN AWE.
This piece is truly a stroke of genius. Excellent my friend. Excellent. ~Pam
Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on November 14, 2005 06:24:54 AM Report
Evocative, conveying passionate images with very few words, very clever, very effective.. Well done!
Comment By: FreeScarlet Begonia on November 12, 2005 02:15:44 AM Report
LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!! Nice work mamacita!!!!! I actually like this one and didnt just say i liked it to get you to leave me alone.....LOL!!! J/K
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 11, 2005 08:22:21 PM Report
Jody
This is just too cool...I love it!!!
SO VERY CHIC!
~Always Cindy
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 11, 2005 12:55:00 AM Report
I like Onthebus's comment..This is hot and to the point, dear..Love it...yereverlovin
Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on November 10, 2005 01:41:23 PM Report
hmmmm..a nice piece on the art of love.
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on November 10, 2005 07:56:08 AM Report
The act of or the feel of love can be this way. But only if the soul is open to it. And the heart willing to be released. And that bond created can never be broken..! Excellently done my friend..! two thumbs way way up..!
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on November 9, 2005 08:59:07 PM Report
Solid, gas, liquid. Love it and the symbolism.
love, Nut
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 9, 2005 02:05:51 PM Report
I'll admit I had to read a few times because the first line kept tripping me up. It was really me and not your talent. I like this write because you are invoking emotion with parallelism. Hard to do for most of us.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 9, 2005 12:04:16 PM Report
So many styles of writing, same beautiful face, NICE! Joe
Comment By: FreeJeff on November 8, 2005 08:18:31 AM Report
I lik this...
Not sure I understand it, but like it no the less.

Jeff
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on November 7, 2005 08:31:02 PM Report
Well Missy! Everytime I get tied up elsewhere, I come back to find a different writer! I kinda like this one, hope she hangs around. I think that's about 18 distinct personalities so far. I guess I'm gonna have to start calling you 'Sista Sybil' - Jude

This is an egmatic style that I love. It leaves me free to make of it whatever I want which is, naturally, perverted and kinky.... Nice work Evilene!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on November 7, 2005 06:31:00 AM Report
Ssssssss, yes stoke the fires Jody, so much said in these singular words, consume me baby!!! Henry
Comment By: FreeRoy Bateman on November 7, 2005 05:20:54 AM Report
Again, you've captured the essence of a situation in just a few words...it's a gift!
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 7, 2005 04:03:22 AM Report
Dear Jody - Everyone seems bowled over by this but I am afraid Ijust do not understand it -it is wonderfully enigmatic and full of mood music, but exactly what about I cannot even guess. Perhaps you would be kind enough to enlighten me.

Warm Wishes


David
Comment By: AdminRichardM on November 6, 2005 08:41:45 PM Report
Rock on Jody! With few words or many, the images conjured always float, transferred with feeling and intensity that captures.
Rich
Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 6, 2005 07:40:34 PM Report
Oooooooooohhhh yessssss, divinity here. Until blood is smoke and I am liquid...woweeee..conjurs up all kinds of thoughts. YOu know I like this kind of write, the simplicity of it, the singuklar words giving pauses and making it hard to breathe. Do it again, do it again......Barbie
Comment By: FreeEdward Kent on November 6, 2005 07:25:07 PM Report
fantastic little ditty from a girl that is so pretty,,loved it Eddy
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 6, 2005 07:21:02 PM Report
Hi, little Wiccan Princess~ I see now what you and I were talking about~ Your work says a lot within the few lines, and when those things come to pass, then it will be~! Such devotion~
Margaret...lovin' the write...
Comment By: Freetom on November 6, 2005 06:52:39 PM Report
Lovely and sensually emotional fiery erotic great write Jody
hugs kisses
tom
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 6, 2005 05:27:48 PM Report
Lovely post Ms.S~
I agree with LadyD..so much said in few words.
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 6, 2005 04:48:37 PM Report
Ms S.S.: I like this very much. A lot in very few words.


Lady Dragonwyck




 


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