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Author Name: FreeGaia 2 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2005 17:11:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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We fall into a pit

And pull ourselves out

Others stay in the pit

For eternity in doubt


We cut ourselves

Deep blades gently in our skin

People get help for the pain they fill within

Others cut till there life is slowly bleeding


We stare at a clear blue sky

But all we see is a broken mirror

Then sometimes people get together

Built the mirror and fix it back

While others stare into the broken pieces of themselves


We tear each other open

And walk away from them

Maybe they will go back

Since there conscience is burning

But some donít and live life each day never learning


Life can be so hard

Suicide is the only way out

Sometimes people seek help

Others take themselves out

All I can say

Is just to

Swing life away

Author's Notes:

I don't know what inspired me to write this,

(The last part ''Swing Life Away'' I didn't know how to seal the open so I thought I'd play some music and this song came on so†I put that in† Swing Life Away - Rise Against)

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Comment By: FreeNicholas Ryan on November 21, 2005 03:21:31 PM Report
Thats A greatly written, love it..

-The Emo Kid-
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 11, 2005 06:32:22 PM Report
Very nicely written, Ryan~! I loved the title going through and being repeated to make your message....Good work..
Margaret..the Bag Lady


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