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Author Name: Freebluefish 1 Comments
Date Added: November 20, 2005 15:11:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unwrap Thoughts

unwrap the thoughts of day

cast aside the empty shapes

speak not of the seashells

I have hidden in

the emptiness of  my lips--

with the most unnerving calm

words write their mysteries

on the hides

of our souls.

 

for i can only misspell

dim notions

the lack of  life

but one day spirit

shall write its own expressions

in my world

of cold explications…

 

as i wait at corners

boundaries speak  beyond  knowledge

as a  path of meekness

gleam  in brilliance

a place outside my

frailties and mistakes

for words like fireflies beam

in my empty house of limitation

and jostle against the shadows

that i have nourished

 in my inner most garden

night the most bitter of fruits…..

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 2, 2005 07:11:53 PM Report
ANDREW , WHAT CAN I SAY?? YOU WRITE LIKE NO ONE I HAVE EVER READ..?? YOU BRING SUCH FEELINGS INSIDE WITH DEPTH AND HONESTY.. THIS BEATS WITH SUCH FEELINGS
.ALWAYS ~ SHE




 


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