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Author Name: FreeGaia 3 Comments
Date Added: November 23, 2005 14:11:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Take It Out~

Take out my lungs so I can no longer breathe

Take out my heart so I cannot feel

Rip out my brain so my thoughts yield

Rip out my teeth so I can no longer eat

Slit open my eyes so I shed no tear

Slit my wrists and break the veins so my life can flood away

Break out my teeth so I can no longer chew

Break my jaw so I can no longer smile

Cut of my hands so I can no longer reach for help

Cut of my feet so I can no longer run

Break my spine so I canít get back up

Break my nose so I can no longer use that sense

Burn my body into ash and scatter them into a sewer

Burn my past so no one can find who I was

Hang my body in the air

So people can laugh and stare

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 14, 2006 06:56:41 AM Report
I  feel a great deal of pain in your write. Feelings from the heart are sometimes best expressed in our writings... and you definitely have a gift of expression!
Well done my poetic friend.
Lubs.
Comment By: FreeMeg on January 4, 2006 05:28:57 PM Report
Ouch. The imagery is vivid and your words harsh. Very well-written! Thank you for sharing:)
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: FreeJeff on November 23, 2005 09:54:16 PM Report
Strong write Ryan...Happy holidays

Jeff




 


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