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Author Name: Freetimespell 4 Comments
Date Added: November 29, 2005 14:11:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love You Forever
If I let you go

Would the blood return.

Can my weak frame,

Still carry the burden.

Like you always said,

Loves heavier than air.

Now I have nothing to taste,

Just this bitter feeling.

Will I loose my senses,

Like you've lost yours?

Didn't the time fly love,

When we weren't having fun.

But you never ever told me,

This would start happening.

I guess it works both ways,

Talking to yourself again.

Oh well thanks for the memories,

They were really really great.

I told you Id love you forever,

It's only a little herpes darling.
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:O)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on February 17, 2006 03:28:29 PM Report
Oh I certainly didn't expect THAT ending.
OH dear. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeJennifer on November 30, 2005 02:39:42 PM Report
Never expected that ending. Actually I laughed, I feel guilty for laughing, because I am sure that is a not so nice thing to have and deal with. Definatly uniue, timespell. definatly unique!
Jen
Comment By: FreeKeri on November 29, 2005 04:12:36 PM Report
I don't know whether to laugh or gape.

Hmm...other than that, lol, a few grammatical issues. Otherwise...lol, oh dear.

Be well...

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeLoved by nobody on November 29, 2005 02:41:08 PM Report
really good, i can realate to this so much!! Luv yah!! Heather




 


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