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Author Name: FreeGaia 3 Comments
Date Added: December 08, 2005 09:12:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Final Fathers Words~

~Final Words~

Goodbye young one,
Dont worry soon I will be gone,
You shall live and grow without me,
I shall vanish deep within your stare
My life essense slowly erodes in the cold air,
I hope you will never forget my name
Nor my memories or face
I hope you know I'll be watching you in a holy place
And oneday we shall meet again
For that I am sure
These are the last words i will say
And you will remember these words
For in your heart they will always stay
Your my pride and joy
I love you my son
Now its time for daddy to sleep.

Author's Notes:

Okay someone read this and asked if I was a father and I was dying, I simply replied no, I have no idea what inspired me to write this I just woke up In the middle of the night and wrote this for some reason =S like it wasn't me writing it at all.

Anyway please comment It would be appreciated :)

~Ryan~

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJeff on December 27, 2005 04:25:30 PM Report
Cool poem Ryan, the ones that wake you up in the middle of the night usually end up being the good ones...lol

Jeff
Comment By: Freeivy on December 8, 2005 08:00:01 PM Report
WOAH!!!!This poem is so awesome mate!!
its goin into faves
great job
ives
Comment By: FreeAngel on December 8, 2005 06:19:02 PM Report
Excellent really sad so very touching

Love Angelxxx




 


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