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Author Name: Freewritelady 6 Comments
Date Added: January 01, 2006 09:01:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Observance

The night, she burrowed her pale face,
within dawn's pink bossom bare;
and wrens came out to bid her well,
while myself, I just sat there.

I watched it all unfold this morn,
the day tucking in the night;
and oh how lonesome my soul became,
as I witnessed this nuptial site.

How long now have they been this way?
I can't say I can recall.
Centuries now, and still at it,
what a lesson for us all...

Author's Notes:
Kindness  and comfort in a relationship goes a long way.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 11, 2006 08:16:38 PM Report
This is some very poetic poetry,Honey Pot..:O),,,,,,I mean that..Very beautifully worded obsevance, Barb...len
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 9, 2006 08:34:47 AM Report
We could all learn from this, I suppose...Some things are just meant to go together...Day follows Night follows Day...joining together beautifully at dawn and dusk, sometimes leaving us with the most breath taking sights imaginable!
Ah, yes....
Now, if only all the other stuff went into physical relationships...Your "about" section really hits home.
Love ya!
Glata
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 2, 2006 06:21:11 PM Report
Very nicely done, Barbie...Calming and serene.....

Margaret..the bag friend...
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on January 1, 2006 02:36:04 PM Report
Very very true my friend. Great message portrayed. :o) ~HUGS~ *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 1, 2006 10:52:41 AM Report
BARBIE, THIS IS SO PRETTY LADY.. KINDNESS IS A SOOTHING FEELING..WE ALL NEED IN OUR LIFE!!! HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on January 1, 2006 09:35:25 AM Report
Said so very well. Great metaphor. Cheers to kindness and comfort. Joe





 


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