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Author Name: FreePoetrySmiles 10 Comments
Date Added: January 03, 2006 23:01:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Missing Your Admiration

Everything shines, just a bit,

When you look at it. There is

a sort of light it emits.

The world stops for a second,

Everything beckons. There is

a sort of meaning, reckoned.

Suddenly, you come to face
nothing, save blank space. There is

a sort of comfort. EFFACED!

Replaced with an elation,

Offered temptation: there is

a quiet desperation…

…missing your admiration…

Author's Notes:

*~*For Babar*~*

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on February 14, 2011 01:15:36 PM Report
Nice work Meg. I like the verse form, and you make the most of it. Well done.
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on January 30, 2008 02:34:58 PM Report
You don't have to worry about missing my admiration although it is from afar.  I love your writings my friend.  I need to make a copy of this to refer back to at times.

Damon

Comment By: FreeRobert Neal on December 30, 2006 11:08:52 PM Report
This has nice form and tempo.  You set up key words very well.

 

Robert

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 7, 2006 09:34:07 PM Report
You are certainly a 'Wordsmith', Meg~! Graciously we welcome you to write your library full of talented works~! This is quite a dedication to Babar...Thank you for sharing...
Margaret...the Bag lady
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on January 7, 2006 08:59:21 PM Report
Welcome to Creative-Poems Meg. This is a very thoughtful write for your friend. :o) *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: Freezerocool on January 5, 2006 02:34:39 PM Report
hey that was great!!
Comment By: FreeRyan on January 5, 2006 01:55:21 PM Report
Great work :) I hope to read more from you soon, welcome to CP =D

~Ryan~
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on January 4, 2006 11:26:01 PM Report
Hello, Meg, and welcome to CP. Damon is certainly an admirer of yours and a friend of mine, for he sent me here to meet you. I'm so glad he did. You do fine work. This is very nice. Things do take on a certain aura that was not there before when sincerely admired. Very good poem. Well done. ML
Comment By: Freelilac on January 4, 2006 04:46:57 PM Report
now this is good poetry! keep writing these gorgeous poems! and...welcome to the site, also.
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on January 3, 2006 11:57:37 PM Report
Hi Meg, I am so glad to see that you are here. I see that you haven't lost your touch for fantastic writing. I knew, though, that you wouldn't. You are a wonderful writer. I was afraid that the site wouldn't let you join. When I try to get on at my son's house his computer always crashes too, but I don't have the slightest as to why. Welcome to the site! I hope that I am the first to welcome you, but I am sure that I won't be the last. I hope that you like this site as much as I do.
Damon




 


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