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Author Name: Freewilliamgoldenpen 9 Comments
Date Added: January 09, 2006 20:01:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Crystal City

The forest floor glistened here and there with dappled light,
where magical event and happenings would take place in their sight.

For, three children played in amongst the protection of the living trees,
where a kind old wizard looked on, unseen by the three of these.

They were playing hide and seek, when a leprechaun appeared
to them with a big smile on his face,
"Hello children, what are you playing in this enchanted place?"

The children, unafraid, told him of their games of fun,
and how their first visit to the forest had begun.

"The forest has been watching you, and enjoy
you being here to play,
and now you will meet the wizard and fairy queen,
who have said that you can stay.

For they will show you the 'Crystal City' that is
here amongst the trees,
where you will see many wondrous things,
such as talking butterflies and singing bees."

Author's Notes:

Just something that I'm thinking of doing in story form.
What do you think of the story idea?

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Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on February 12, 2013 03:00:34 PM Report
A favorite poem I hadn't commented on; beautifully done! - Joe
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 2, 2007 04:34:30 PM Report
i think it was fantastic, sounds inviting, the crystal city,  beautiful idea

Comment By: FreeGlata on February 13, 2006 02:32:23 PM Report
I think this will make a wonderful story! Write it, please!
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on February 8, 2006 05:06:23 AM Report
Just found this Sir William. Hope you are working on the story. A delightful tale. jp
Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on January 26, 2006 11:49:00 PM Report
Are you on LSD Mr. Goldenpen?....LOL, just joking. It will be very interesting if you decide to turn it into a book. Go For It!
Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on January 26, 2006 11:48:57 PM Report
Are you on LSD Mr. Goldenpen?....LOL, just joking. It will be very interesting if you decide to turn it into a book. Go For It!
Comment By: FreeAngel on January 11, 2006 04:39:49 PM Report
Adorable magical how I love these writes. Brilliant

Love Angelxxx
Comment By: FreeRebeca Weiss on January 10, 2006 05:59:45 PM Report
very cute! I like the idea, it's quite creative! This is a wonderful poem! Great write!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 9, 2006 10:15:29 PM Report
Any storyline that has talking butterflies, just MAKES MY DAY, and you know this~! (smile)...And, a crystal city, how inviting....
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