Small Boats Adrift. by Graham Jones

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		Date Added: January 10, 2006 13:01:25	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Small Boats Adrift.

Time passes people stare
But no one really is aware
Of what you feel, or see or do
Or what your life is going through

Small boats adrift in passing time
All looking for some kind of sign
To show us where it all went wrong
To fill the void and make us strong

Together we are a force indeed
But all alone, a windswept seed
That falls upon some barren ground
To shrivel up without a sound.

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	Comment By: HOPE on March 15, 2010 10:40:27 PM	Report
	A wonderful poem i couldn't agree with you more. Tinadee Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Sharon Jorcil James on April 5, 2008 08:24:59 AM	Report
	The title caught my attention......the poem aptly depicts life. Fantastic comparisons. Bravo on a truly deserving award Graham!!!! Sharon JJ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: J on November 10, 2006 01:57:03 PM	Report
	Excellent depiction of life. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on the award. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: With pain comes strength on June 9, 2006 08:36:42 AM	Report
	This is a great write, well done on the award nik Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on June 8, 2006 08:43:40 AM	Report
	Well, Graham! congrats! awesome to see this award sitting here where it belongs! Hugs and congrats again! Glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leonard Wilson on June 6, 2006 02:03:49 AM	Report
	This movie sux and I'm sorry I paid the nine bucks to see it....Sorry, Graham...I was thinking of the Star Wars IV, I think.. This poem, on the other hand was well worth the price of admission..What a bleak outlook on it all..VERY nicely penned, buddy...len Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: aaron payne on June 5, 2006 05:40:05 PM	Report
	very good. aaron Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Moon Fairy on June 5, 2006 06:56:27 AM	Report
	Graham~ Excellent post and congratulations on your shining award! (Moon~ Respond To This Comment*

	Comment By: Anna Aliena on June 5, 2006 04:51:31 AM	Report
	A poem both good and beautiful! Congratulations! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Cindy Bendel on June 4, 2006 11:41:31 PM	Report
	Graham I am so happy to see you have won the award this week. This is such an excellent write, I enjoyed reading this so much. Congratulations! ~Cindy Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on June 4, 2006 07:21:51 PM	Report
	Graham: I enjoyed this when I first read it and I am VERY PLEASED to see you won a Feature Poem Award. Good work and keep penning... Lady D Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on May 26, 2006 07:42:12 AM	Report
	The flow and rhyme to this is outstanding! The meaning is just as powerful...we ARE but individual seeds, when taken as one, but together, we can become something mighty. Though we might feel like we are all just adrift, most of the time, there's a goal somewhere in mind, and the winds might toss us about, but we usually DO make our destination :) Big hugs to ya! and I loved this write... Glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on January 10, 2006 09:37:01 PM	Report
	THIS IS WONDERFUL TO READ SIR!! YOU DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS.. I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STYLE OF WRITING!!! YOUR FRIEND ~ SHE Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leonard Wilson on January 10, 2006 08:28:58 PM	Report
	Great flow to this...It's fun to read a work that flows this nicely..Not as easy as it looks...len Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on January 10, 2006 02:42:10 PM	Report
	graham: this is an excellent write. I really enjoyed this. Lady Dragonwyck Respond To This Comment