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Author Name: Freepenfold18 15 Comments
Date Added: January 10, 2006 13:01:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Small Boats Adrift.

Time passes people stare
But no one really is aware
Of what you feel, or see or do
Or what your life is going through

Small boats adrift in passing time
All looking for some kind of sign
To show us where it all went wrong
To fill the void and make us strong

Together we are a force indeed
But all alone, a windswept seed
That falls upon some barren ground
To shrivel up without a sound.

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on March 15, 2010 10:40:27 PM Report
A wonderful poem i couldn't agree with you more.
Tinadee

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on April 5, 2008 08:24:59 AM Report
The title caught my attention......the poem aptly depicts life. Fantastic comparisons. Bravo on a truly deserving award Graham!!!!

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeJ on November 10, 2006 01:57:03 PM Report
Excellent depiction of life. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on the award.
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on June 9, 2006 08:36:42 AM Report
This is a great write, well done on the award

nik

Comment By: FreeGlata on June 8, 2006 08:43:40 AM Report
Well, Graham! congrats! awesome to see this award sitting here where it belongs!

Hugs and congrats again!

Glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 6, 2006 02:03:49 AM Report
This movie sux and I'm sorry I paid the nine bucks to see it....Sorry, Graham...I was thinking of the Star Wars IV, I think.. This poem, on the other hand was well worth the price of admission..What a bleak outlook on it all..VERY nicely penned, buddy...len
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on June 5, 2006 05:40:05 PM Report
very good. aaron
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 5, 2006 06:56:27 AM Report
Graham~
Excellent post and congratulations on your shining award!
(*Moon~

Comment By: FreeAnna Aliena on June 5, 2006 04:51:31 AM Report

A poem both good and beautiful! Congratulations!


Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 4, 2006 11:41:31 PM Report
Graham I am so happy to see  you have won the award this week. This is such an excellent write, I enjoyed reading this so much. Congratulations!

 

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 4, 2006 07:21:51 PM Report
Graham:   I enjoyed this when I first read it and I am VERY PLEASED to see you won a Feature Poem Award.   Good work and keep penning...

 

 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 26, 2006 07:42:12 AM Report
The flow and rhyme to this is outstanding! The meaning is just as powerful...we ARE but individual seeds, when taken as one, but together, we can become something mighty. Though we might feel like we are all just adrift, most of the time, there's a goal somewhere in mind, and the winds might toss us about, but we usually DO make our destination :)
Big hugs to ya! and I loved this write...
Glata
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 10, 2006 09:37:01 PM Report
THIS IS WONDERFUL TO READ SIR!! YOU DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS.. I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STYLE OF WRITING!!!
YOUR FRIEND ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 10, 2006 08:28:58 PM Report
Great flow to this...It's fun to read a work that flows this nicely..Not as easy as it looks...len
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 10, 2006 02:42:10 PM Report
graham: this is an excellent write. I really enjoyed this.


Lady Dragonwyck




 


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