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Author Name: Freepenfold18 6 Comments
Date Added: January 12, 2006 18:01:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Epitath To A Broken Heart

Take heed a tortured heart to heal
Scarred and bruised like orange peel
Worn, now empty cast aside
Like so much flotsome on the tide

It beats a lonely tune for one
Devoid of feeling, cold and numb
Its melody, now a requiem
That rides the wind of a distant fen

Empty cold,its essence gone
No spark or magic to keep it strong
Battered by the tears of time
No longer hers and barely mine

Deprived of hope,its plea's unheard
Its grief unshared,like a wounded bird
Turned inside out and torn apart
An Epitath to a broken heart.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freepaul holmes on January 29, 2010 05:23:12 AM Report
I echo the thoughts of Michael's comment. Yes, this is quality. So sad to know there are so many people with this condition.
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on February 26, 2006 12:39:47 AM Report
Excellent piece of writing that you have here Sir. I thoroughly enjoyed it; you definitely have a gift.
Damon
Comment By: Freelilac on January 13, 2006 12:06:49 AM Report
this is so beautifully sad....you really are gifted! "Battered by the tears of time
No longer hers and barely mine". I love these lines.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 12, 2006 09:33:58 PM Report
SIR ROBERT,
THIS POEM MOVES THE READER OF SO MANY PEOPLE I KNOW.. SO MANY HEARTBREAKS IN THS WORLD..((Empty cold,its essence gone
No spark or magic to keep it strong
Battered by the tears of time
No longer hers and barely mine

SO VERY TRUE MY FRIEND..I KNOW OF THIS WORRLD ALL TO WELL NOT ONCE BUT SEVERAL TIMES.. BITTER LESSSION WE ALL LEARN.. SOUNDS LIKE YOU NEED A HUG.. LATER ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 12, 2006 08:07:56 PM Report
Excellent work, Graham~ Such a smooth read, and a delight to discover your post~!

Margaret...
Comment By: FreeMichael on January 12, 2006 06:15:07 PM Report
This is a quality poem! It is quite refreshing to read a poem that has been carefully crafted with considerable thought and attention to detail. I could read poems like this all day. This is an excellent model for someone who is just starting to write. Were that more had your discipline instead of just spilling out a jumble of feelings. Thank you, Michael




 


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