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Author Name: Freepenfold18 8 Comments
Date Added: February 07, 2006 06:02:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Release.

Locked and lost in past events
That drag me through the mire
Most of which make little sense
To quench the inner fire

These passageways within my mind
That twist and turn throughout
Seek response within my soul
They want to scream and shout

That dark place deep inside me
Can only struggle for the light
Kept shackled to emotions
Now well hidden from others sight

No doubt one day I'll find that peace
The solace that I seek
Until that time, I'll sip sweet wine
And drift away in sleep.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freelilac on February 8, 2006 01:10:05 AM Report
BRAVO! your timing is always perfect, as with your ability to rhyme such great lines. very envious of you! lol!! love this great poem!
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 7, 2006 08:05:15 PM Report
Have travelled this road as well

Brilliant write

Love Angelxxx
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 7, 2006 01:20:26 PM Report
May you find the peace you seek
Be it not too far away
Reach out and grasp it, hold it tight
Keep it near, both night and day

Solace runs on elusive feet
Emotions run ever wild
Peace can be so hard to find
For that hurting, inner child

Graham, this was sad, yet hopeful...A fantastic write, my friend. Reach out...what you seek is out there!
Hugs...GlataImage hosting by Photobucket
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on February 7, 2006 10:40:08 AM Report
I LOVE THIS ONE GRAHAM....i have traveled to this same place myself. A wonderfully written piece.

~Cindy
Comment By: FreeAnna Aliena on February 7, 2006 10:29:35 AM Report
Your poem describes beautifully those storms of thoughts that can rise within our minds, and the ending feels so hopeful!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 7, 2006 09:44:50 AM Report
GRAHAM,
AS I READ THIS HOW I SO CAN RELATE TO THE SUFFERING HEART,MIND AND SOUL!! YOU HAVE CAPTURE LIFE SO WELL.. I KNOW THE TASTE OF THE WINE PUTS MY MIND AT EASE.. LET'S DRINK TOGETHER MY FRIEND .. LET THE GLASS OF CRYSTAL WINE CLINK!!..
GREAT POEM ~ SCARLETT
Comment By: FreeEdward Dooga on February 7, 2006 08:23:53 AM Report
Graham,
The peace awaits you. The light shines. There is hope. The poetry is good.
Ed
Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 7, 2006 07:35:03 AM Report
Ah yes, far better to sleep it off after a nice nip than to let it rattle your cages. Barbie




 


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