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Comment By: paul holmes on February 1, 2010 02:54:31 PM |
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A touching poem on a sad scene. It truly is heartbreaking to be in such a situation and unable to help. You told it so well.
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Comment By: Cindy Bendel on February 25, 2006 02:18:35 AM |
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Beautiful Graham, sorry i haven't been keeping up with your writes...now i see what i have missed. You are the best.
~Cindy
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Comment By: Glata on February 24, 2006 01:52:03 PM |
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Graham this is beautiful! With each write I see more and more of the heart inside you being revealed and it's pretty amazing. Seems the park isn't always a place of laughter and play...It's also a place where people go to grieve...mourn...cry. This hits home beautifully.
Hugs...
Glata
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Comment By: Angel on February 23, 2006 01:36:14 PM |
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Oh dear now this has me crying a mothers love runs so deeply. This tore at my heart strings.
A wonderful read
Love Angelxx
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Comment By: Patricia Lee on February 23, 2006 05:27:50 AM |
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This is so vivid I can almost see it,and so sad,a wonderful poem.
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Comment By: Damon D. Brewer on February 23, 2006 03:10:40 AM |
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Very well done indeed! I truly enjoyed reading this one. You are a fine poet, and this is one great poem. It likely will go down in history as one of the greatest.
Damon
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Comment By: She Whispers on February 22, 2006 01:28:11 PM |
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GRAHAM,
YET ANOTHER HEARTBREAKING POEM ABOUT LIFE AND THE HELL SO MANY ENDURE.. SOME TIMES PRAYERS IS ALL WE CAN GIVE THAT PERSON..HUGS ~ SCARLETT
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