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Author Name: Freewritelady 12 Comments
Date Added: February 24, 2006 08:02:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Druggist

And who are you,
to dispense advice?
You, the apothecary for love?
It seems to me,
you dole out the pills,
you would never swallow yourself.
Shamefully hiding behind your counter,
laughing at customer's expense;
wearing that white coat,
pretending all is well in
your alchemist's lab.
But I know you for who you are,
for what you are.
While you mock the disease and me
for contracting it,
at least I have courage to seek the cure.
At least I have hope.
While you stand there in your plastic smile,
talking and smiling so sweet,
telling others their lives are so dowdy,
I look further inward.
And what I see, is a man with no remedy,
for the same thing that ails him.
Pity.

Author's Notes:
ahhhhhhhhh..I feel soooooooooo much better now...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRob Sparks on April 14, 2006 05:20:57 PM Report
yes that was so awesome.... I like the way it was put into words. brilliant
YOU ROCK
rOb
Comment By: FreeChrysanthemum on March 8, 2006 12:13:29 PM Report
YES!!! thank you 4 telling them off 4 me and the rest of the world I'm drowning in pills and I dislike those's white coats verry greatly....awsesome write even tho I didn't have 2 say.
~Chrysanthemum
Comment By: FreeNicholas Ryan on March 7, 2006 08:11:14 AM Report
thats good as always, sorry im sure you don't recionzine me because I always change my name lol..well ttyl or soon, read my new poem ight later nick

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 5, 2006 06:34:29 PM Report
Now THAT'S what I call a rant!!.. let it all out, Sal.:O) Damn them snooty drug dealers!!...len
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on March 5, 2006 01:26:07 PM Report
A great rant Barbie, you laid it all out there and took no prisoners, I hope all the bile has now left the building. Would you like to sing "I feel pretty" now? Goos frabaa, goos frabaa, LOL, I loved it Barbie. Henry
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on February 28, 2006 06:54:18 PM Report
Barbie, this is a wonderful vent/rant. I love the way that you wrote it. It would also fit real druggists; I often wonder when getting a prescription filled if the pharmacist ever takes the same medicine that he is filling for me. Great Job on this one!
Damon
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on February 28, 2006 03:46:39 AM Report
Only an artist knows what it's like to get it all out in this manner. Writing can be such a cathartic. An Exlax for the mind. jp
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on February 26, 2006 02:41:49 PM Report
Ripping the emotions out of yourself and throwing them upon the page can be it's own cure now can't it..! Excellent tale you have penned my friend..!
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 25, 2006 11:00:26 AM Report
Great venting a perscription you should dish out to him. Nice one loved it Barbie

Love Angelxx
Comment By: Freetom on February 24, 2006 01:15:47 PM Report
hugs Barbie go ahead and rant and I too can add to some of your rantings
hugs kisses
tom
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 24, 2006 12:56:11 PM Report
And can I get a BIG amen from the congregation! I agree with Richard...tell us how you REALLY feel! LOL girl, when you pour it out, it's boiling hot! I loved every line...Sister mine, you're TOPS in my book...Rant on, rant on!
Hugs...AFTER you put the spikes away...
Glata(grin)
Comment By: FreeCandy on February 24, 2006 10:38:06 AM Report
well done!




 


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