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Date Added: February 27, 2006 06:02:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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An Unrequited Love.
Your eyes as deep as liquid pools
A man could drown his soul in
I crave to touch those lips so sweet
And soft as velvet doeskin
You create in me a rage unknown
A fantasy of Odin
A dream that's sought, but left untouched
Like the forbidden fruits of Eden
I'll bear this pain with no remorse
and carry with me always
In thoughts and dreams, and memories
As I watch the years receding.
Author's Notes:
With a heart thats crushed
Despair becomes the norm
No pen on earth, can describe the pain
In any shape or form.
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Comment By: FreeGlata on February 27, 2006 11:16:08 AM Report
Broken, crushed hearts often never heal, and I can only ache for the pain I read here...
This is a beautiful write, Graham, but full of the heartache you have described.
Always offering a listening ear and a shoulder...
Glata
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 27, 2006 11:15:48 AM Report
Love can break the heart in two. Words cannot express just what pain and emptiness inside you feel when your heart is broken. God it hurts bad and goes on hurting for what seems like forever. You never forget the one you truly love.

Magnificent (HUGGLES))

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 27, 2006 07:59:26 AM Report
SIR GRAHAM,
THIS IS SO HEARTFELT ALSO FOR ME YOUR POEMS SO MOVING AND SO PRETTY TO READ..SUCH SADNESS IN THIS PASSION FROM YOUR HEART ... TO LONG FOR SOMEONE THAT YOU DESIRE OR NEED CAN BE VERY PAINFUL AND WRITTEN WORDS TO TRY TO EXPLAIN IS TEARFUL TO SAY THE LEAST..MY HEART HAS PAID THE PRICE SEVERAL TIMES WITH SO MANY TIMES SETTING IN THE DARKNESS OF NIGHT WITH A GLASS OF WINE JUST THINKING!! WANTING THERE ARMS AND THE VELVET PETAL KISS OF LOVE..HUGS ALWAYS ~ SCARLET
Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 27, 2006 06:38:26 AM Report
Ohhhhhhh so true Graham! This was quite beautiful, very soft and a delicate view of love never had but wanted so very, very much..nice piece here. Barbie




 


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