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Author Name: FreeSerenity 6 Comments
Date Added: February 28, 2006 23:02:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Numb

A blank sheet of paper.
Pen in my hand.
It gives me the power,
To create a world of words.
But the paper mocks me,
For my hand is eternally numb.
It does not move.
It does not write.
Worst of all, it does not feel.
And my world is shattered.
Bits and peices.
Shards of mirrors.
The blockade of the heart,
Nerves of the messangers.
The blood which flows,
No longer...
Where can it all go,
Except back to the heart.
And these reflections,
Oh so familier...
I do not wish to see.
For the one I see,
It is not me.
Yet the tears still flow,
In the world that is still so great.
Though my fear is greater.
It tries to overpower me,
And it is winning...
It taunts me.
Injecting false thoughts in my head.
Untrue feelings in my heart.
The ultimate lie.
Worst of all, it blinds my eyes.
These eyes that light the world for all,
But darkens it for me.
And I stumble and fall.
Further and further,
When there are no more depths to fall.
And the world is on a pedestal,
Looking down at me.
I question why I must compete.
Why must I rise above.
Feel as though I am finally good enough.
As though I am an equal...
The fear is winning,
It's driving me insane...
And on this white paper,
My hand lays upon.
Still...motionless...asleep...
And I can't even lift it,
To dry these eyes.
To let them see once more...

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on April 17, 2006 10:55:32 PM Report
very good. aaron
Comment By: FreeJames Peak on April 3, 2006 08:55:47 PM Report
Nicely done! Wonderfuly written!

Peak
Comment By: FreeCherie on April 3, 2006 03:54:17 AM Report
wow, that one was awsome, that is a wicked poem. its so powerful.
Comment By: FreeShane Arnold on April 2, 2006 09:35:34 PM Report
I agree with all the others perhaps this is one of the best I've seen very very good poem!
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 26, 2006 12:03:54 AM Report
EXCELLENT CREATIVE WRITE!
YOUR A GIFTED POET!
FLETCH
Comment By: Freeunsung hero on February 28, 2006 11:50:54 PM Report
Wow this is incredible. It's really hard to believe sometimes that some of the best authors and poets on this site are so young. You, my talented sweetheart, are one of those young poets. *Fav* =)




 


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