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Author Name: FreeGaia 4 Comments
Date Added: March 02, 2006 09:03:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Letter to Daddy

Dear Dady

I mis yu so mch

Mumy is sad dady, whn r u commin home? And Mumy keps sayin to nanna tht u wnt be commin home? Dady did I du smethng rong? I sory if I did dady I need u here to push me on the swngs and lok aftr me when I hrt my kne. Rember dady whn we were in the car and it crshed? And the ambunce ws there? I didt see yu whn they tok me to hspital, I knw ur ok thu dady, I hpe I see u soon, mumy pt me in ths funy suit it made me lugh I wis u cud se it dady, I hav to go nw I wil leav ths on ur pilow coz mumy says yu cme hme evryngiht and mak sure we r k thn leve gain, hop yu read ths dady

Plese cme home dady, me and mumy mis yu

(I miss you so much
Mummy is sad daddy, when are you coming home? And mummy keeps saying to nana that you wonít be coming home? Daddy did I do something wrong? I sorry If I did daddy I need you here to push me on the swings and look after me when I hurt my knee, remember daddy when you were in the car and it crashed? And the ambulance was there? I didnít see you when they took me to hospital, I know your okay thou daddy, I hope I see you soon, Mummy put me in this funny suit it made me laugh I wish you could see it daddy, I have to go now I will leave this on your pillow cause mummy says you come home every night and make sure we are okay then leave again, hope you read this.

Please come home daddy, me and mummy miss you)

Author's Notes:

Dunno why I wrote this either, anyway please please comment

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeH. Louise on August 17, 2006 08:17:13 AM Report
This is one you can be very proud of.
An excellent write about a tragedy that quite a few children have to face.
You've portrayed the child's innocence perfectly in this!
I've got goosebumps because when I read this, I saw it all happening.
These weren't just your ordinary words, I heard the child speaking them.
The way you paint the scene into the reader's head is amazing.
That's a true talent m'boy.

All the best,
Han
x

Comment By: FreeBrittani Bylsma on June 13, 2006 06:34:46 PM Report
That's really sad, but I really love the childish writing. Very different and expressive. Great Job.

Much Love,

Britt

Comment By: FreeMeg on March 15, 2006 12:56:16 AM Report
Oh my gosh :-(. My dad just passed away, and this totally made me cry! It's really sweet, how innocent children are and how they can see death without really seeing it. :-( Well-done, thanks so much for sharing. I am putting this in my favorites.
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: FreeJeff on March 2, 2006 04:54:40 PM Report
Heartbreaking write Ryan, kinda different for you...
well done my friend.

Jeff




 


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