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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 17 Comments
Date Added: March 15, 2006 04:03:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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While I walked

Faith looked at me today

Said “sorry buddy I can’t stay”

“What I stand for has become hazy”

“Since this world became so crazy”

 

I saw hope heading out of town

Asked him why he wore a frown

He told me his reason for the face

“I no longer seem to have a place”

 

Sat next to human nature on a train

Looked like she was in lots of pain

I enquired if she was going or coming

“I don’t really care as long as I am running”

 

Walked past love sitting all alone

She looked like she was far from home

Asked her if she had a place to stay

But she just got up and walked away

 

I sensed greed in shadows lurking

I knew that he was busy working

Whispering into good men’s ears

Trying to buy them out their fears

 

And last of all I bumped into despair

When I found no one was there…

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeguest_writer on March 16, 2009 06:49:01 AM Report
this was a sad poem. at least for me - because of the last stanza. the picture is cool btw. it goes with the words of this poem.
Comment By: FreeRodra on July 24, 2008 03:01:50 AM Report
This is really a great piece...

The concept and idea are really wonderful...

Congratulation for the award...

You Deserve it, Nat!

 

rodra

Comment By: Freesherry wilbur on May 14, 2007 10:38:24 AM Report
i love this poem very very truely a great piece of work . hugs sherry
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 30, 2006 02:05:14 PM Report
WOW Nat! This is terrific, congrats on the award, it is so deserved! Joe
Comment By: Freeb doneff on March 22, 2006 05:54:38 AM Report
Amazing Nate, and very deserving! Congrats to you! Barbie
Comment By: Freejoia on March 21, 2006 10:33:38 AM Report
A righteous man on an Easter Egg Hunt, and all he found was one rotten egg....enough to make a man cry....awesome poem and so deserving of the award for originality and imagination. Great work, congratulations, joia
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on March 20, 2006 10:49:33 PM Report
Wow...excellent personification in this poem and creative thought...very well written and deserving of this award.

CeeCee
Comment By: FreeMichelle on March 20, 2006 09:52:26 PM Report
Wow, I love the idea for this poem, it was so creative, and it was written so well, congratulations!

Shellers
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on March 20, 2006 09:16:24 PM Report
So much truth spoken here...
A beautiful yet somewhat sad write.
Congratulations on nthe award.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeRebeca Weiss on March 20, 2006 06:04:42 PM Report
very well penned. I enjoyed reading this! Congrats on the award.
~Beca
Comment By: FreeTalitha Lindsey on March 20, 2006 02:51:47 PM Report
love it.......... you deserve that award
Comment By: FreeJeff on March 20, 2006 10:52:27 AM Report
Great flow to this piece.
Congratulations on the award.
Jeff
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on March 20, 2006 02:47:54 AM Report
Congrats Brother, I've always known your work is good. This is confirmation
Love
Cat
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 19, 2006 10:13:21 PM Report
Nate: super congratulations on your Feature Poem Award. Your work certainly deserves it.

Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on March 19, 2006 09:53:05 PM Report
Very nice :-) I often wondered where the virtues and lights had gotten to, but then I’m sure they left long ago, if they were ever there at all. Great work!
Congratulations on winning a featured.
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on March 17, 2006 10:16:16 AM Report
An interesting and thoughtful about the state of humankind at the moment. What's wrong with the world in 6 stanzas. Well Writtten.
Cat
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on March 15, 2006 10:59:10 AM Report
Wonderfully penned son. This is a winner. Great job...Love, Mom




 


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