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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 45 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2007 06:09:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mourning Tears

 

 


Mourning tears;
crystal droplets of dew
cling to velvet petals.
Drenched in desire,
an ache borne
for touch.
Wild,
vibrant,
and
softly
fleshed.
Thorns
draw
blood
to
etch
the
soul
with
scars
of
love.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJose Noriega on April 5, 2008 07:48:15 AM Report
very good imagery i love it
Comment By: FreeSteven on January 26, 2008 03:11:28 PM Report

Very,very,very good.lol. This is amazing, it's so detailed and the imagery you produce is outstanding. :]!!!


~Steven


Comment By: FreeAngelique on October 6, 2007 02:33:06 PM Report
This is a very strong poem, you've captivated the mood and feeling so good.

I really enjoyed reading this piece, so beautiful :)

 

Take care,

 

angelique

Comment By: Freeabby on September 12, 2007 05:22:27 AM Report
Undoubtedly a great poem and deserving of the award.

Creatively done. Congratulations!

Abby 

Comment By: Freeb doneff on September 11, 2007 08:55:48 AM Report
You creative wench you...more applause, applause at the award!
Always a pleasure to read, and love.
bb

Comment By: FreeSuzin on August 30, 2007 05:29:00 PM Report
This is yet another beautiful poem.  Making the poem into the
shape of a rose was so creative, it looks amazing! Congratulations.

-Suzin




Comment By: FreeEmil on June 8, 2007 09:23:40 AM Report
Written with such expression. You have penned a piece well deserving of the award given

Emil

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on June 2, 2007 10:31:21 AM Report
WOW..............john
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 1, 2007 06:12:48 PM Report
Drenched in desire.

perfect! beautifully worded. Congrats Ali x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 30, 2007 12:31:37 PM Report
Miss S.S.:  Super Congratulations on this Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on May 29, 2007 01:56:57 PM Report
A fine piece for consideration.  Congrats on your award!
Comment By: FreeAdri on May 29, 2007 05:18:23 AM Report
Congrats on winning for this great piece J!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on May 28, 2007 06:33:43 PM Report
A rose for a rose i say. Couldnt happen to a prettier witch
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 28, 2007 05:21:07 PM Report
Beautiful Jody a fav. Like the rose exquisite

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on May 28, 2007 05:38:24 AM Report
I remember this from the first time I read it, and its stil as beautiful as ever.
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on May 27, 2007 03:19:10 AM Report
Congrats Jody. I loved this in September and gave it a ten back then cause it's easy to dance to. jp
Comment By: FreeJessica on December 11, 2006 08:07:09 PM Report
Lovely!
Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 20, 2006 08:42:13 PM Report
Now THIS is a picture worth A thousand words!  (Even though you summed it up in 34, lol!)
Comment By: FreeBellaLuna on October 8, 2006 10:33:22 PM Report
-smiles- simply wonderful! Blessed be...

Lune

Comment By: FreeBellaLuna on October 8, 2006 10:32:42 PM Report
-smiles- simply wonderful! Blessed be...

Lune

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on September 29, 2006 03:37:25 PM Report
HOORAY! You should never have deleted your stuff......still tiffed over that.
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on September 26, 2006 10:09:53 PM Report
I do remeber this one.

So beautiful!

Keith

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on September 24, 2006 06:33:19 PM Report
I am glad you put this back up, it highlights your natural talent for layering your writing and for saying more than the reader either expects to see from such seemingly simple construction or will even realise is there. I do not doubt that most could read this over and over and still never get out of it everything that you put in. You should be proud of this one, princess, I am certainly proud of you.

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 24, 2006 02:37:18 PM Report
This  is why you've won awards for your work. I too am impressed...that I am on a first name basis with such talent. jp
Comment By: FreeRoss McCague Rosco on September 24, 2006 02:17:36 PM Report
Beautifully developed. Both this poem and the next use their physical space to shape their meaning. Very effective. More please.
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on September 24, 2006 07:19:08 AM Report
Somehow this piece brings to mind Scarlet.

Lovely and passionate.

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: TrialAnn on September 23, 2006 09:49:19 PM Report
Your work has progressed in very different directions since this, still lovely.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 23, 2006 07:18:53 PM Report
Jolen,
So glad you posted it again.. you have the class and style pretty lady..You sure know how to write a passionate Poem about love or heartaches..
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on April 21, 2006 10:46:49 PM Report
Jody, this write is perfect. I have yet to master shape poetry. ;o) *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeChuck on April 7, 2006 08:30:42 PM Report
I love shape poetry... and Killroy was here.
Comment By: PremiumPaul on April 1, 2006 01:03:01 AM Report
Very ee cummings like. Very good
Paul
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 31, 2006 05:07:14 PM Report
I love how this is shaped, like the flower. Incredible and creative write Sorceress, Joe
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on March 31, 2006 11:34:50 AM Report
OH, how poignant Sorceress.

Makes me think of a lovely impressionist painting...of velvet reds, and thorns.

Very unique conjuring Lady.

Best wishes,
Little Fox~
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 31, 2006 08:07:05 AM Report
Sad one, Jody, but cleverly done with the shape...and the picture is beautiful as well!
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 31, 2006 06:23:07 AM Report
Are you the clever one, or WHAT?!!! This is poetry in the first order, Aces..Such strong imagery and is that a shape of a rose I see???..I'm impressed....Yerimpressedfurball
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on March 30, 2006 08:40:41 PM Report
Those Must be some stirring dreams your having to ignite the passion in your pen. This an awesome piece, Jody. I very very much enjoyed it.
Keith
Comment By: FreeRoss McCague Rosco on March 30, 2006 07:38:52 PM Report
"You can always come back,
But you can't come back all the way."
Bob Dylan

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Comment By: FreeCeeCee on March 30, 2006 07:37:35 PM Report
Jody,

For some reason I have only recently discovered your poetry and am so glad to have done so as you have been hitting them out of the ballpark!

Loved the combination of soft rose petals and the thorns within the same poem and the use of long vowel sounds in an "ache borne". Very beautiful, once again.

Cari
Comment By: FreeShane Arnold on March 30, 2006 05:26:07 PM Report
interesting effect with the one or two word lines
Comment By: FreeScott Malthouse on March 30, 2006 02:17:45 PM Report
Divine my friend. A luscious poem showing both the spleandour and the pain of love. The rose metaphor is beautiful may I add.
Comment By: Freetom on March 30, 2006 01:23:59 PM Report
lovely poem Jody great images and written with hear passion and desire.
hugs kisses
tom
Comment By: FreeCorvus Mellon on March 30, 2006 10:25:56 AM Report
What a lovely poem. I loved the imagery. Unusuall but it works :-)
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 30, 2006 08:52:07 AM Report
JODY,
YOU DEAR LADY YOU WRITE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEMS.. THE ROSE SETS THIS LOVELY POEM.. LATER ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on March 30, 2006 06:41:08 AM Report
This is very beautiful Jody, I love how you express so much in just a few words. Your comparison of looking back on a love past to thorns on a rose is excellent!! Henry
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 30, 2006 03:46:34 AM Report
Hauntingly beautiful for such a short write.




 


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