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Author Name: FreeSensitive_Poet 20 Comments
Date Added: April 04, 2006 19:04:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Undeserved Torture

             

     As I glare at what appears in front of me,

     I can't believe what I see.

     Scared, battered, and torn are we.

     Hitler and us are opposite beings that just don't agree.

  

    I spy many watchers, but to be willing to stand up for what's right are none.

   My eyes swell with burning hot tears as our clasped hands drift away becoming one.

  As of this moment, my heart now weighs a ton.

  The only food source that I have eaten in weeks is a bun.

 The only one that knows where my mom has gone is God.

 Come to think of it, I have no trace to my brother Todd.

 Suddenly I knew what was coming as my enemy's head drilled me a satisfying nod.

 This is all so very odd!

The slicing numb feeling in my body is caused by a knife.

It's just moments away until the sharp blade ends my life.

As I breathe my last breath I wonder why,

We are the ones to die.

This is the question that continues to have an unknown reply.

 

  

Author's Notes:
This is a poem about a day in the life of the Jews when they went through the holocaust back when Hitler was in power. I was studying it all in english class and at the end of our unit, we had to write a poem. This is a young boys perspective of it all and him and his mom got seperated from eachother and he ended up getting tortured real quick. I hope you enjoy!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeanne on July 31, 2009 02:01:07 AM Report
This is a great write, you can really feel the power of their emotions in your words.
I especially like "As I breathe my last breath I wonder why, we are the ones to die. This is the question that continues to have an unknown reply."
Awesome way to end it.

Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 7, 2008 10:31:19 PM Report
what a great poem! This is stirring but true. How sad.... You wrote this so well and it sent goose bumps down my spine!
Jen

Comment By: FreeMario on July 18, 2008 12:51:22 AM Report

what a powerful poem.. its sad to think that something like this cud have happened.. i look back in time.. reading all the history books.. and this is something that shud never be forgotten.. and still we dont learn from the past.. great write.. to tell u the truth it brought tears to my eyes. i remember it when i read it first.. i very much enjoyed it.. but now as i read it again wow.. i am very much joyful to read it.


Comment By: FreeLeroy Taylor Lyon on May 20, 2007 04:43:20 PM Report
real good writes i hope you comment on my poem
Comment By: FreeS on February 15, 2007 06:07:13 PM Report

great poem i liked it


Comment By: FreeBrittany A. on November 14, 2006 06:03:33 PM Report
Hey Shaylie, this is a very good write, I like it. Good job.

Brittany

Comment By: FreeAmanda on November 1, 2006 06:43:26 PM Report
Amazing. Keep writing you have talent. Oh, and I think this one deserves an award. =)

~Amanda

Comment By: FreeJoe on October 8, 2006 04:29:28 PM Report
Excellent write, a time in history that will never be forgotten, yet still persists in the world today and still nobody says anything. Joe
Comment By: FreeKhira on May 31, 2006 07:27:15 PM Report
thats really good makes people think about what happened back then

~~~scooby~~
Comment By: FreeStarlit on May 20, 2006 06:34:35 PM Report
You have such a talent. Keep it up...STAR*
Comment By: FreeChristin Mowery on May 7, 2006 07:38:02 PM Report
Very descriptive. Great job. Write some more and post them!
Comment By: FreeMario on May 4, 2006 08:21:06 AM Report
Great write, very descriptive. Sad but the feelings you get when you read it, makes it beautiful.
~Love Mario
Comment By: FreeLubaina on April 22, 2006 02:02:21 PM Report
Well described.
Lubs.
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 19, 2006 05:47:28 PM Report
This is such a descriptive write, Shaylie...you drew it out very graphically. Amazing write!
Glata
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 17, 2006 02:21:24 PM Report
Very good! I will be back and hope that you will have new ones up soon.
Damon
Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on April 16, 2006 12:49:20 AM Report
good job!
Comment By: FreeMeladori Magpie on April 10, 2006 06:55:51 PM Report
I don't think 'undeservable' is a word.
Other than that, good.
Comment By: FreeRachel on April 9, 2006 05:47:14 PM Report
great write, depressing but good.
Comment By: FreeAaron on April 9, 2006 05:41:34 PM Report
Good write!
Comment By: FreeBOB on April 4, 2006 07:19:43 PM Report
Shaylie, a look back in history that we must never forget, great insight into the holocaust, great write, I look forward to seeing more of your work, take care, Bob :)




 


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