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Author Name: Freewritelady 15 Comments
Date Added: April 09, 2006 19:04:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Proposal

So much heart I have to give you!
But with words that others have said!
But none have meant them truer,
If I lie, then God strike me dead!

I can't  build an empire without you,
I can't face one empty night;
not knowing the ways you have loved me afore,
and would forever, if things could be right.

Every effort to place you proper,
to keep you hidden, tucked away,
is damned by this infernal fire, and
molten by desire each day.

You inhabit every pore and thought,
to the center of my being;
and I, so hopelessly in love with you,
stand blind at the vision I'm seeing.

I surrender now, all that I am,
and forevermore shall be;
please take my hand, oh man of mine,
and  a husband to me, be.


Author's Notes:

Hey...a girl has to keep practicing these things! Sighhhhhhhhhhh, lol...who knows? Someday she  jussssssssst might get it right! lolol...I'm gonna start calling these CrazyLadyWrites, lolol....thanks...B.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on April 26, 2006 05:38:59 AM Report
Such an honest plea. It is there. And when it happens, well, you'll see fireworks like never before. After all, you are truly worth it. I LOVED this. No crazy lady write here, just good honest emotion. :o) ~Pam
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 15, 2006 06:13:10 AM Report
passionate and full of power! The only way to go!
Any other loving is just passing the time. fantastico
Ali x
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 14, 2006 07:43:46 AM Report
Not at all crazy dear Barbie, blessed is the man that responds to this heart!!! A most beautiful and precious soul you reveal...makes me wonder if there is a man alive that is worthy of this heart of pure gold.

These lines just rocked me to the core:

You inhabit every pore and thought,
to the center of my being;
and I, so hopelessly in love with you,
stand blind at the vision I'm seeing.

Perfect!

~Cindy
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 13, 2006 10:02:15 AM Report
Well said Barbie. I love this write--someday it will happen if you dream it hard enough. dreams do come true.
Damon
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 12, 2006 07:34:34 PM Report
I would love to take your hand Barbie, but you handcuffed mine to the bed! LOL! Seriously though, this is just awesome, Joe
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on April 11, 2006 09:47:30 PM Report
Well Crazy Lady, it is said that we create our realities. You will eventually create this one. Great title for your book, Crazy Lady Writes. jp
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 11, 2006 06:43:00 PM Report
GREAT WRITE!
WHAT A FINE PROPOSAL. YOU WILL GET IT RIGHT! I BELIEVE IN YOU!
YOU JUST GO AHEAD AND DREAM YOURSELF A DREAM COME TRUE!
YOU SURE DESERVE ALL THE HAPPINESS IN THE WORLD DEAR LADY!
YOUR A SWEETHEART! HUGS TO YA Image hosting by Photobucket.....FLETCH
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 10, 2006 01:23:26 PM Report
Crazy? Why so? It's the heart speaking, gal, and that ALWAYS leaves us feeling like it's a bit crazy...but I think you are just as sane as the rest of us...well, maybe not THAT bad, lol!
This is pure beauty, hon...CrazyLadyWrites, Inc. I think I like it!
Hugs to ya!
Yer nutty sis in NC...
Glata
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 10, 2006 07:57:03 AM Report
I see nothing crazy in these words Barbie, I hope you get everything that you ever hoped for and more!! fine writing on this one Barbie. Henry
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 10, 2006 06:07:37 AM Report
Real adorable Barbie

Lov eAngelxxx
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on April 10, 2006 03:32:42 AM Report
There must be something in the water at the moment Barbie, Everyone is going all romantic (Bless them).
"and I, so hopelessly in love with you,
stand blind at the vision I'm seeing."
Very cool :-)
Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on April 9, 2006 11:17:01 PM Report
Cool and keep writing the way you see it Ms Barbie Doneff!
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on April 9, 2006 08:59:15 PM Report
You are too cute! Made me smile.
Keith
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 9, 2006 08:11:44 PM Report
I like tthee totaal, pedal to the metal love in this write, Write Lady....Just great!!...len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on April 9, 2006 07:15:51 PM Report
Oh, Dear...Dream on Woman! Keep the faith ~It will happen :)

So nice to have a sister who glows as I do! :)

Heartfelt and lovely, friend ~

Hugs,
Pamela




 


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