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Author Name: Freewritelady 11 Comments
Date Added: April 12, 2006 19:04:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Stone

Indelible etchings
paving way for scars
to cling to later
when all has turned to stone
except our own heart.

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Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on April 29, 2006 07:17:36 AM Report
Cold. Bleak. I probably know what the etchings mean/say. *sigh* Simple truths that touch a life now and then. Throw that rock in the lake, and plant a flower in its place. :o)
I loved this Barbie. You hit hard with emotions in this piece. Very nicely done. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on April 20, 2006 05:13:03 AM Report
B, you really know how to say feelings with words. WOW! Now, I feel stupid, because of what I just said. *blushes* Too early in the morning. ~HUGS~ *S* C
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on April 15, 2006 08:38:41 AM Report
Whoa..! A huge idea captured in a small jar of a few words..! I love the idea of the etching tool leaving a mark for a pain or scar to hold on to you by..! Just leaves the mind spinning off into new directions..! Nicely done my friend..!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 14, 2006 07:46:53 PM Report
Very tthoughtfful and poetic write..Ya got me swoonin'''len
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 14, 2006 07:40:53 AM Report
Wow this one hit like a rock right between the eyes! Volumes spoken in these few short lines! I'm loving finding these short peices of wisdom by so many of the writers here that I love.
Hugs and love ya girl!
Glata
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 14, 2006 07:39:42 AM Report
Wow Barbie this is profound....few words, much said...hopefully the heart does not turn to stone, but in some cases even the heart finds it necessary to survive....sad, but telling of how scars tell the tales of where we have been.

wonderful writing as always ms writelady!

~Cindy
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 13, 2006 09:47:29 PM Report
EXCELLENT MESSAGE!
YOU ARE A GIFTED LADY!
HUGS ...........FLETCH
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 13, 2006 05:54:13 PM Report
Few words speak volumes

Great write

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 13, 2006 10:03:39 AM Report
Well said my friend!!!
Damon
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 13, 2006 06:26:23 AM Report
We all bear scars from this life. I prefer to think of the scars as lessons learned along the way. It is the ever resilient heart that ultimately sees us through it all. Beautiful writing Barbie! Henry
Comment By: FreeMichael on April 13, 2006 12:10:13 AM Report
"Scars to cling to later...." is a wonderful description of utter hopelessness! It isn't uplifting, but you have made your point with precise definition. Michael




 


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