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Author Name: FreeAntonyFrank 2 Comments
Date Added: April 21, 2006 10:04:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You.

You.

Loathed by some,

loved by few.

I don't know what i've done to deserve the truth...

I don't know what i've done to deserve you...

Still,

this is what you get,

a cigarette but no way through

and i don't know what i've got to prove.

Some people say that things will improve,

'Try something new!'

But maybe i'm just a fool.

Most people don't have all the answers

but they believe in you.

I need something to hold on to...

I don't need the truth...

I need You!

You.

Tragic to some,

magic to few.

I don't know what i've done wrong to lose you.

I love you.

I love you.

Author's Notes:

Written 1997.

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 23, 2008 02:03:57 PM Report
"Most people don't have all the answers" ..no, they don't...in fact most people don't have a single answer you need because what they see from the sidelines isn't a complete picture. They cannot know exactly what has brought the two of you to this place or how it affects you now, in the moment.

 

Communication and understanding with the person whom you love should take you closer to the answer to the question of "I don't know what I've done wrong to lose you". There is a lot of confusion and frustration in this poem...it drips of inner turmoil. Sorry for you loss Antony.

~Barbara~


 


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 28, 2006 11:41:48 AM Report
ANTHONY,
WOW THIS IS AWESOME .. I REALLY ENJOY THE STYLE OF THIS POEM..LATER ~ SHE




 


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