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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 3 Comments
Date Added: April 30, 2006 19:04:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Give Up

I give up I just donít care anymore

I am so low down, Iím touching the floor

Watching everything fall from my life

Words cutting me deeper than any knife

And the conclusion I am trying to swerve

Is that all I am getting is no less than I deserve

Hereís an expression that most people know

In life its case of you reap what you sow

Well here comes karma to bite me in the ass

The crap from my past this wave will surpass

My blood will flow like some people are demanding

Feel hard from my high and hit a crash landing

Bruised and battered, bloody on the floor

I hate this feeling, I canít take it no more

Thereís nothing but cold left in these eyes

The reflection in the mirror I begin to despise

And just when I think it canít get no worse

Another familiar face...

Pushes me into my hearse

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Comment By: PremiumKaela on May 1, 2006 05:04:46 PM Report
But if you think about it Karma's going to bite everyone on the ass at some point - we're all in the same, slightly rocky, boat.
So it's chin up not 'give up' (or something entirely less cheesy) :0)
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on May 1, 2006 08:16:12 AM Report
If Karma's going to pay you a call, at least part of what she gives you will repayment for all the good things you've been to all of us,
Especially your Sis
P.S. Very well written, the feeling leaps out the page. :)
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on May 1, 2006 05:27:02 AM Report
Wow Nate, this is hard to read, I hate to see people I care about unhappy. If karma is doing it's rounds then thanks for the warning. I have not known many people as strong as you, and to hear you say you're giving up is lie OMG the water is running dry, what will we do??

(I know I'm talking out my *** probably, all thanks to lack of sleep + everything else = crazy Jo) What I'm trying to say is no matter what lows you fall to, you always know where I am if you need me, I'm ALWAYS there.

Jo x


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