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Author Name: Freehashmiabbas 2 Comments
Date Added: May 18, 2006 11:05:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Eve & Daughters

Noone was there when looked upon

Over the roof that sounded, Bang!!

It is just wind or was that thief

Come how but in this rain and storm

Eh! That must be some flying log

Out was the power at that time

For rain was hard and storm was rough

Someone is there!! She yelled at me

Or how could I than saw that thing

Under that window of backside

Nay! I can not be that blindfold

Do go back there and look once more

It was like this, that I was forced

Never shall I say no to her

Rotten did got the tiles of roof

And slippery too as moss was grown

I go tip-toed but quickly though

Not caring how bad it could be

Yes! You are right, sure I did fall

Never so loud have someone cried

It was but I who gulped that pain

GOD helps me for what I say hence

He who obeys her every word

To earth thus came right from the top

And on the next day I was HOSPITALIZED.

Women are surely piece of art

Incarnated of mother Eve

Father of mankindís, only wife

Ever reckoned for heavenís lost

Some day shall She believe it All

Such nicely how can one be judged?

Time comes and goes and ages thus

On goes this legacy of hers

Risk taking is Manís business hence

Yes! You are right, sure I did fall

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Comments:
Comment By: Freecyma khan on May 22, 2006 09:53:19 AM Report
greatly writen as i said u r gr8 poet!!!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 19, 2006 10:46:41 AM Report
WOW... THIS MY FRIEND IS A MASTERPIECE!! ***** .. YOUR FEELINGS AND THOUGHTS ON EVERY LINE.. YOUR TALENT JUST BLOWS ME AWAY!! WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS..WHAT A GIFT YOU HAVE MY FRIEND..THANK YOU FOR SHAREING THIS!! PLEASE JUST KEEP WRITING AND I WILL READ THEM...YOUR A DEAR MAN!! ALWAYS ~ SHE




 


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