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Author Name: Freepenfold18 6 Comments
Date Added: May 18, 2006 11:05:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Illussions.

Beauty is as beauty see's
And if the heart and soul agree's
A magic moment then ensue's
To grip the mind with hidden clue's

Is she single is she free?
Is she really meant for me?
I see her smile, I see her hair
But does she even know I'm there?

She stands real close, her perfume strong
I am her shadow, right or wrong
Then she turns a fleeting glance
Could this be a new romance?

My heart has stopped, I cannot breathe
Her look carresses me with ease
And then I feel the sweetest kiss
This surely must be heavens bliss

I am undone, completely lost
My heart the flame within a frost
My eye's wide open, I can see
Its nothing but a dream to me.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 19, 2006 04:20:09 PM Report

YOUR PASSIONATE HEART
AND SURRENDERING MIND
IS WRITTEN ON EVERY LINE

SHE TAKES YOUR BREATH COMPLETELY AWAY
EACH AND EVERY SINGLE TIME

THIS SCARLET BLAZE THAT BURNS HER NAME
THIS LIGHTED FIRE WAS SHE TO BLAME

YOU ARE HER SHADOW RIGHT OR WRONG
YOUR ANGEL THAT LIFTS YOU IN HER SONG

YOU HEART BURNS IN THE FROST
YOU SIR ARE NO LONGER LOST

ALWAYS ~ SCARLETT



Comment By: FreeGlata on May 19, 2006 07:28:19 AM Report
Graham, this is great! The meter of this was perfect and the sentiment in the lines is just too outstanding!
Great job, and I loved this!
Hugs...Glata
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 18, 2006 03:29:55 PM Report
Beautiful love that Grabs the heart and images will not leave.

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeNicola J. Steel on May 18, 2006 02:22:34 PM Report
Lovely poem, the meter was perfect. I really enjoyed this poem.
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on May 18, 2006 12:18:24 PM Report
Lovely, lovely weavings Graham,
Uniquely penned, eloquent, beautiful~

Best wishes,
Pamela
Comment By: FreeErnestine Northover on May 18, 2006 11:11:32 AM Report
Wow! What a delightful write Graham, I loved reading this one, you really have written a lovely one here. It flowed so well, and followed the story so accurately. Thanks for the treat. Love Ernestine XXX




 


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