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Author Name: Freehashmiabbas 5 Comments
Date Added: May 23, 2006 04:05:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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BETRAYAL (acrostic)

Been resigned quite early

Enigma still lives in me

To this day, I reckon your faith

Roving free, Yes I was and gay

And then you never turned up

Yammer of thee I sing

Aloud in woods of hope

Lonely and betrayed.

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As per the topic of week, nothing personal.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 25, 2006 02:45:47 AM Report
What can one say about betrayal that could benifit one and all. Perhaps that it hurts so terribly much and knowing that, you should be extra careful not to betray anyone.

Acrostics are fun and can pull up the thoughts that smoulder within us. =))

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeGlata on May 24, 2006 07:38:38 AM Report
A great addition to that particular topic of the week. I love the challenge of an acrostic, and you did a great job with this one.
Too often, we find ourselves betrayed, but that's apparently the price we pay for being human. There will be many times that we are betrayed, but also the betrayer...Even when we don't want to be.
Great job, once more...
Glata
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 24, 2006 04:21:43 AM Report
Like a jungle alone in the unknown. Great write

Love Angelxx
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 23, 2006 11:29:10 PM Report
ABBAS, IN THIS LIFE I'M AFRAID THERE IS MORE THAN WE KNOW!! GREAT POEM... LATER //SHE//
Comment By: Freecyma khan on May 23, 2006 09:27:35 AM Report
hmmmmm...nicely done




 


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