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Author Name: Freepenfold18 5 Comments
Date Added: May 25, 2006 07:05:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Betrayal (Acrostic)
Better I should not have loved
Eternal not to be
Thoughts of you with others
Raises hate and pain in me
Always and forever
You then became my wife
All you said was cloaked in lies
Love betrayed and wrecked my life.
Author's Notes:
Never tried one before so thought I'd have a go.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBellaLuna on May 26, 2006 12:25:27 PM Report
This has a lot of emotion wrapped in it and it is portrayed in the greatest of ways. Great write. Blessed be...
Lune
Comment By: FreeMichael on May 25, 2006 05:45:59 PM Report
I can share your pain, Graham, and you've described the betrayal process eloquently. That said, however, 'Tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all'. My best wishes, Michael
Comment By: Freemystical angel on May 25, 2006 11:34:45 AM Report
great
its pain which brings out the most in oneself
just love it
Comment By: FreeGlata on May 25, 2006 09:58:39 AM Report
This was your first attempt??? You did fantastic on it! Acrostics can be wonderful fun...and sometimes quite a challenge.
Awesome attempt, Graham...I'm impressed!
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 25, 2006 08:31:46 AM Report
TO SOME LIFE IS A PLAYFUL GAME
THEY WANT TO BRING US TEARS AND PAIN

THOUGHT OF OTHERS THAT THEY KISS WITH FIRE
LEAVING US WITH HATE AND KILLING DESIRE

BETRAYAL IS A WOUND THAT DOES NOT HEAL LEAVING US NOTHING BUT HATE UNREAL

ALWAYS ~SCARLETT




 


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