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Author Name: Freesitara 18 Comments
Date Added: June 02, 2006 01:06:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Eyes
The golden snow of dusk,when the sun fades, I've seen it only in an artist's shades. Alpine slopes bathed in eternal green, I've heard from poets but never seen. They speak of satin,crystals and wine These remain strangers to these eyes of mine. Rubies filled with crimson fire and diamonds with virgin rage, Are as far from me as anger from a sage. Nature's treasures are beyond my world of mortar, Nor shall I behold riches in this life or after. Though I may not see green vales or man's riches fine, I've seen my heaven in the eyes of thine.
Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem a few years back,when I once saw how much one could see in people's eyes.especially the ones of those we love.It kinda hit me hard,though I've read and heard so much about eyes and their praises.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMilton Roy on September 26, 2008 07:48:20 AM Report

happy birthday to you..tasmia...you have a unique way of poetry writing...the lines are very very soft and sensitive...enjoyed reading.
Rahbar.

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 3, 2007 08:19:02 AM Report
the eyes are a window to the soul, they can tell you so much and so little about a person just by a quick gaze into them, beautifully done, amazing infact you have a gift with words,

Comment By: Freeleroy taylor fiddler lyon on January 6, 2007 12:26:48 AM Report
really good write

Comment By: PremiumCliffton Clay Cromberg on November 7, 2006 09:15:53 PM Report
Tasmia, Your words touched me deeply! You are so  right! The eyes are a mirror to the soul! And the reflections you see with love are the ones you were meant to see! You have a mystical spirit! I can only imagine your eyes reflection!  Clay TheWolf...
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on October 29, 2006 09:00:22 PM Report
So beautiful, Sitara.

Moved my heart with your beauty of words.

KeithRay

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 28, 2006 09:08:21 AM Report
Please dear lady Welcome to our site... this is truel amazing poem to read..Being a artist I see the vivid colors as well in velvet words... priceless dear lady...~ She Whispers
Comment By: FreeLubaina on September 12, 2006 08:03:11 AM Report
THIS IS VERY BEAUTIFUL AS ALL YOUR WORK IS. ARE YOU PUBLISHED YET? IF NOT YOU SHOULD BE AS YOUR TALENT IS EXCEPTIONAL. ALL YOUR WORK IS EXCELLENT MY FRIEND. HOPE LIFE IS TREATING YOU WELL, STAY HAPPY.
LUBAINA
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on September 9, 2006 08:42:22 AM Report
It is really a very gorgeous piece of writing...Carry on little maiden!
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on August 12, 2006 12:02:14 PM Report
Wonderful Creative Ability Shown Here. Beautiful Description!
Yours ........................Fletch
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 31, 2006 11:01:33 AM Report
A poetess to your bones.

(into favs)

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on July 14, 2006 01:50:22 AM Report
Brilliant poem.

 

Regards,

 

Antony.

Comment By: FreeLukeofHomelandSecurity on July 6, 2006 04:11:39 PM Report
Another excellent write, beautiful.  Yeah, I always end up writing about eyes even when I try to avoid mentioning them.  It's too hard avoiding the eyes, power and their magnetisms fire.
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on July 5, 2006 09:34:27 PM Report
WOW!!  Now take it from me......this is absolutely fantastic!

Very creative, lovely rhyming scheme, and the message of love is very potent.

Bravo Tasmia. Into favs for me my indian sis.....

 

Sharon Jorcil-James

Comment By: FreeHeike on July 3, 2006 11:16:41 AM Report
Very touching verse, Tasmia, I liked it a lot.
Despite the images that have been overused in literature, there is always beauty waiting to be discovered.
Best wishes,

~Heike

Comment By: FreeShruti on July 1, 2006 09:43:45 AM Report
Oh this is brilliant! I was actually going to write to you about the little poem you have in the "about" me section...its wonderful, but this! You're one to look out for, fellow Indian. Keep up the work.
Comment By: FreeUmang on June 7, 2006 12:52:27 PM Report
amazing write....really enjoyed this one
Comment By: Freeshadan on June 4, 2006 07:31:40 AM Report


this is really nice, your use of words is eally good, nicely written...


Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 2, 2006 01:44:30 AM Report
They say the eyes are the windows to the soul, nicely done here, welcome to the site, Joe




 


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