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Author Name: FreeAntonyFrank 2 Comments
Date Added: June 03, 2006 15:06:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Whatever I've Done.
Come over tonight.
Tell me what's gone wrong.
Tell me what's going on
because i'm losing my mind,
just killing time
and i want to leave my troubles behind.
So tell me, who are you?
Tell me, because i don't think i ever knew.
Are you anything to me?
Someone to love?
Someone to lose?
Tell me something new.
Give me something real.
And we'll spend our days
in the same city,
in the same place.
And we'll make amends for our pain,
 We'll lay down together and drift away...
And we'll dream that nothing's changed.
 
Who are you?
Tell me, because i don't think i ever knew.
Are you anything to me?
Someone who would be someone to lose?
Tell me the truth.
 
Whatever i've done
you must know how it feels...
You must know if it's real.
Tell me
whatever happened to you and me?
Whatever i've done, i'm sorry.
Author's Notes:

Written 1999.

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Comment By: FreeChristin Mowery on October 7, 2006 08:22:25 PM Report
This whole poem is brilliant. Excellently written. Although I love it all, the lines that stand out the most to me are:
...
And we'll make amends for our pain,
We'll lay down together and drift away...
And we'll dream that nothing has changed.

You are very talented.
~Christin

Comment By: FreeCandy on September 20, 2006 11:53:09 AM Report
Im very impressed!




 


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