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Author Name: Freedivafelder 4 Comments
Date Added: June 05, 2006 19:06:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~~God can we talk~~

God can I talk to you for a min.

It's about my gift you gave me.

No it's not that I dont like it.

That's not it at all. as a matter of fact



It's just that when I read it or share it with others.

It seem some time they dont get it at all.

I know, I know I am doing it so you can get the praise.

It's just that I want them to read it and change there ways.

And maybe even get saved!!


Knowing time is at hand and all they want to do

is party and kick it with there friends.

How long can you just live in sin

before you relize that you not going to make it in

Oh yeah I forgot. You have to prick their heart.

You would think they would get tired of playing that part.


And some even think they got a backstage pass.

Thinking cos they have not broken all the commandments.

They can still get in,

and Even the righteous are going to scarcely make it in

and they are living upright.. And I have not read in

your word say we can live any kind of way and still make it in.


While GOD I Thank You.                                                                                                                                                                                                           for letting me rent and just

for letting me get this off  my chest..

Oh and before I go,


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Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 20, 2013 07:20:02 AM Report

Continued to use your gift. For it is a light even at times the darkness cannot understand it. For I myself once was a child of the dark till I seen The Light. love your poem

just me


Comment By: TrialJason Starr on March 16, 2009 05:25:06 PM Report
yes, our gifts are writing, and we never know who, or how these words from God will affect others.we must realize that not everyone is quite ready yet to recieve the message, but in time, and God willing, they too will find thier way.please do not worry about how you are touching people, just know that you are touching people.May the Lord bless you and keep you safe sis.we found our purpose through the words we write, there are many who live life, and never find a true purpose.not that we are better, but we are blessed, and God knew we would use this gift for Him.Great write
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on December 14, 2006 02:27:07 PM Report
Every word so very true. A write that all eyes need to feast upon for sure.

I want to thank you for sharing your heart

so beautifully. God Bless you and yours.


Comment By: FreeRosemartha on November 29, 2006 01:09:42 PM Report
It's so true! I Love IT!!!!


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