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Author Name: Freehashmiabbas 2 Comments
Date Added: June 06, 2006 04:06:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Terror (Haiku)


Petrified poor me
 In a corner of darkness
Seek solace from myself
Author's Notes:
This was originally written as;
In a serene corner of darkness
Petrified me
 Seek solace from myself
Comments By Mr. Jimi, I rewrote it.
Please suggest corrections if further required.
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Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on June 28, 2006 06:45:14 PM Report
The last line has one extra syllable than it should. Has 6 syllables, supposed to be 5. :o) Just trying to help. Great Haiku. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: PremiumKaela on June 6, 2006 04:56:07 PM Report
I don't know anything about haikus (though Mr Jimi Blue's advice helps me understand them more) but I like this and it gets the point of terror across.  Good write. :o)


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