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Author Name: Freepenfold18 8 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2006 15:06:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Submission.
To surrender to anothers charms
To fall into submissive arms
Wraps the heart and soul in peace
Emotions rise to sweet release
Defences fall the eyes will glaze
And to his heart a path will pave
A lover now in captive chains
Her being running through his veins
His heart will rise in palpitation
Together as one in exhultation.
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Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on November 1, 2006 05:57:46 AM Report
Graham - I truly enjoyed this,  It is sensuous without becoming crass.

 

 

 

---Poetrydad---

 

 

 

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 17, 2006 10:22:25 AM Report
Beautiful! Sounds like both submitted to the call of love here...the way it should be :o)

Hugs hon!

Glata

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 19, 2006 04:52:45 PM Report
Lovely poetry Graham! :)

Very....entrancing...you really capture the essence of the content with the words you use to create the ambience.

Excellent!

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 15, 2006 10:58:08 PM Report
Graham,
This poem flows like a silent river of thoughts in the warm waters of  a summer night.
OH__ How the blood flows through the veins of the heart on this poem of submissive feelings.. Breathless to anyones heart reading this,,, It just makes a woman sighhhh
I best step outside for some cool breeze...((Smiles
Always ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeAngel on June 15, 2006 06:14:18 PM Report
This got my pulse racing and my heart pumping Magnificent

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeMichael on June 15, 2006 05:16:39 PM Report
Excellent poem and an excellent example of classical form. Michael
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 15, 2006 04:18:26 PM Report
Hi, Graham.....Your meter and rhyme is impeccable...(sp)...and I find such a passion within the lines...Truly a romantic's poem, Sir.....Nicely written...

Margaret.....

Comment By: FreeKAREN on June 15, 2006 03:55:09 PM Report
The rev ( lol) is right...sometimes its hard to leave a comment on certain poems...what's left to say when its been said???

 

Karen





 


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