| Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on November 1, 2006 05:57:46 AM
Graham - I truly enjoyed this, It is sensuous without becoming crass.
| Comment By: Glata on August 17, 2006 10:22:25 AM
Beautiful! Sounds like both submitted to the call of love here...the way it should be :o)
| Comment By: Wide Awake on June 19, 2006 04:52:45 PM
Lovely poetry Graham! :)
Very....entrancing...you really capture the essence of the content with the words you use to create the ambience.
| Comment By: She Whispers on June 15, 2006 10:58:08 PM
This poem flows like a silent river of thoughts in the warm waters of a summer night.
OH__ How the blood flows through the veins of the heart on this poem of submissive feelings.. Breathless to anyones heart reading this,,, It just makes a woman sighhhh
I best step outside for some cool breeze...((Smiles
Always ~ Scarlett
| Comment By: Angel on June 15, 2006 06:14:18 PM
This got my pulse racing and my heart pumping Magnificent
| Comment By: Michael on June 15, 2006 05:16:39 PM
|Excellent poem and an excellent example of classical form. Michael|
| Comment By: The Bag Lady on June 15, 2006 04:18:26 PM
Hi, Graham.....Your meter and rhyme is impeccable...(sp)...and I find such a passion within the lines...Truly a romantic's poem, Sir.....Nicely written...
| Comment By: KAREN on June 15, 2006 03:55:09 PM
The rev ( lol) is right...sometimes its hard to leave a comment on certain poems...what's left to say when its been said???