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Author Name: FreeSilver Sun 20 Comments
Date Added: July 21, 2006 09:07:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Glimpse of an Eclipse
Part I
 
But a week
In the coarse language of Time.
A shared eternity
In the infinities of Soul.
 
We have sailed through the stars,
Witnesses to their patient awakening.
We shared a universe
During the exhibition of creation.
Our endless night sheltering us
From the inferno of dawn,
As it rose from the shadows
In fiery birth.
 
No longer mindful of the calendar
Of days wasted staring
Over the edge of the world.
No longer need I master
The mechanics of a memory
Programmed only for doubt.
No longer a victim to the looping
Indecision of desire.
 
For your return, I await
Beneath your sky,
In breathless expectation
Of the moment
When I fall into you.

Part II
 
These, the many nights
That have passed, enveloped
With the idle shroud of repetition,
Have reached a climax.
 
From my depths below your sky
I follow the trail
Of a shooting star, staining
The invisible clouds
Like the blood that flows
From the teeth-marks of the moon.
This celestial sacrifice, token of desire,
Offered, that fate may grant
An orchestral encore:
The echoes of silence that pervade
Our secret place
In full-voiced tribute to you,
Their Queen.
A ritual of ancients, performed
Through the weeks of ages.

Part III
 
Speak to me now
And cease the tremors of craving
In this starved heart.
Hold me, senseless out of time.
Give me new life
From the breath of eternity.
Rescue me from the loneliness
Of this crowded plane
In the tender solitude of your unending embrace.
Save me from this ravenous ache
With but a single taste
Of your kiss.
Author's Notes:
Thanks to the witchy woman for the title and invaluable suggestions.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 4, 2007 02:40:32 PM Report
I must admit i had to read it twice to take it all in... and so glad i did :o) this is truely a wonderful piece

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 17, 2006 10:10:30 PM Report
Alluringly beautiful.....
Congratulations on this masterpiece....

Margaret....

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 16, 2006 08:05:54 AM Report
LOL I seem to KEEP offering my congrats! I'm very glad you decided to join CP and grace us with your talent...Awesome work, as always!

Hugs...and congrats!

Glata

Comment By: FreeTobi on August 14, 2006 10:05:16 PM Report
This was a stunning display of imagery and metaphor. I could feel the passing of time as measured by the majesty of the moon. Congrats on the well deserved award.

Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 14, 2006 06:04:51 PM Report
Congratulations on winning a Featured Poem Award.
Tracy

Comment By: FreeHeike on August 14, 2006 05:17:03 PM Report
Congratulations on your award, James :-)!
I'm glad to see this splendid piece honoured.
~Heike

Comment By: FreeJeff on August 14, 2006 12:16:14 PM Report

Well done James,


Congrats~

Jeff

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on August 14, 2006 11:37:36 AM Report

Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds


Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on August 14, 2006 10:40:12 AM Report

Wow.......great write.....amazing....Congrats!


Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on August 14, 2006 05:34:45 AM Report
Congratulations James, on the well deserved award. As always, your work is exquisite.

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 14, 2006 03:12:38 AM Report

Okay, I really give up now...  I have NOTHING to say anymore to justify praises for your work James...  Congratulations firstly, for a more then well deserved win!!  And, sorry dear, I don't know how to tell you how amazing your work is without sounding like a cliché... So all I can say is, WONDERFUL, I am an everlasting fan of your work... 
Adri x


Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 14, 2006 12:17:47 AM Report
Utterly exquisite to read and drink in.....Congrats on the award.

~Cindy

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on August 13, 2006 08:33:20 PM Report
I wanted to congratulate u for winning a much deserved featured award of the week...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 13, 2006 07:09:18 PM Report
Congratulations on your very well deserved Feature Poem Award.

 

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeGlata on July 24, 2006 02:29:37 PM Report
LOL Co-write it is! Awesome job!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 23, 2006 08:20:36 AM Report
James ,
Wow... This poem is just awesome and so outstanding written...Very beautiful and you do have a way with words..love this style!!
  Our Jolen will always help others in their writing.. She is indeed Our Queen..loved by all! Welcome to our site.. you will enjoy it here... looking for ward to more of your poems..
Later India~ She

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on July 22, 2006 11:41:49 PM Report
I enjoyed this James. Tender and sophisticated. Welcome to this wonderful and creative place. jp
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 21, 2006 10:09:56 PM Report
Whatever it is, it's BEAUTIFUL!!...This is my kind of cosmic love, James..Lovely from start to finsh..So glad to see you sticking around...len
Comment By: FreeHeike on July 21, 2006 02:05:30 PM Report
Rescue me from the loneliness

Of this crowded plane

I've been there, too, though still waiting for the rescuer ;-).
You are a true master of words, James.
As for Ms. Sorceress, this is an instant favourite for me.

Best wishes,
~Heike

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 21, 2006 09:51:22 AM Report

What a "love" poem... WOW this is amazing James.  You are brilliant!!!  Yes, J is a force, a wonderful one.  I love this piece, and I must agree with John that this must be one of the best pieces I have read.  Great great great!!  I love this immensely!! 
Adri x






 


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