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Author Name: Freeever_randy 3 Comments
Date Added: July 23, 2006 14:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hope

Fire churning,

Hate burning,
Freedom lost.
 
Hours turning,
Fate spurning,

Happiness lost.

 
Forces warning

Heart yearning

Fortune lost.

 
Hands hurting,

Fights earning,

Heaven lost.

 
Faith learning,

Health returning,

Fears LOST.

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Comment By: FreeAdri on July 24, 2006 04:06:06 AM Report

POWERFUL!!!  Randy, this hits straight home!!  As long as there is love, there will be no fear and ever lasting hope.  The short lines work wonderfully to illustrate the struggle for hope!!!  Brilliant, I love this immensely!!!
Adri x


Comment By: FreeWide Awake on July 23, 2006 06:18:24 PM Report
Interesting style Randy, very unique :o)

I liked the turn around with the last line~

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeSara on July 23, 2006 02:33:55 PM Report

A great poem, very well writen and creative. I enjoyed reading it.






 


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