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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 5 Comments
Date Added: August 05, 2006 19:08:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I WAS WITH YOU IN MIND AND IN SOUL
I did come to you,
I was the sleep you needed,
The sleep was the calm desired,
in finding you peace, I succeeded.

You saw me in your dreams,
I was the morning ray of light,
You rolled over because of my nudge,
my arms were around you so tight.

I was not with you in body,
I was with you in mind and in soul,
One day we will be together,
becoming the halves that make each whole.

Author's Notes:
Barbie wrote a poem titled "Claim Me", this was my response. Thank you Barbie for the inspiration here, Joe
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLubaina on August 16, 2006 12:04:18 PM Report
Expressed very well, I loved it!!

Lubs.

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on August 12, 2006 01:28:10 PM Report
This was sad and a beautiful picture of love and devotion. well written

 

God Bless

Tina

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on August 9, 2006 06:30:39 PM Report
Ether really beautiful Joe!

A real pleasure to read :o)

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeTobi on August 6, 2006 09:02:13 PM Report
Beautiful words that bring out the best of a kind and caring soul. I admire the way you are so inspired. I found this very comforting in the message that though we may feel otherwise, we are never truly alone. We could all use such a comfort in our lives!

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 6, 2006 10:38:44 AM Report
Joe, I am so impressed with this. This isn't just any reply...you had clear ideas here, clear images and words of soothing comfort. I am really impressed by your work here..this was gentle, soft, delicate...always glad to be a source of inspiration! B., bowing to the master of sweetness!




 


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