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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 32 Comments
Date Added: October 20, 2009 11:10:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Rising To Honor *co-written with James Whitworth*
Winged lightning pierces the distant night,
Bearing crystal flames of prismatic light.
Radiance climbs chromatic skies o'er the east,
As a summit of shimmering mists is reached.
 
Sentinels of darkness move stealthily aside;
Arrows of luminance fill the surrounding skies.
This challenge accepted with no fear of defeat -
Sweet surrender of spirits too long incomplete.
 
We stand united through mutual conquests,
Starved children nursing at milk-filled breasts.
Succored fledglings, we rise for midnight flight,
Our vision on the new horizon within sight.

Rising in the warmth of destiny's embrace,
Those ancient, weathered trails our footsteps trace.
Under announcements of sunlight inherited from dawn,
From the ashes of our yesterdays, a flame is born.
 
Sharing this journey along the stars and beyond,
Promises of protection, never to abscond.
Meeting as creation's infernos rage.
Beholding the turning of tomorrow's page.
 
In the fury of the moment, under eternity's gaze,
Sharing a fall into these endless days.
Replacing the fear with clarity of mind -
This dream comforts the memories we left behind.
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Co-written with the incredibly talented James Whitworth.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePhil on September 10, 2012 08:37:08 AM Report
This is a great poem. It's so descriptive and...well...poetic. Every word in every line is loaded with meaning and metaphors that really helps to get across the picture and the message of the poem and the feeling that is behind it.

 Definately one of the best I've seen.


Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on February 25, 2007 09:42:27 PM Report
What magic you and James have created here in this fantastic write!!

Congrats on the award Sweetie pie.

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on December 30, 2006 12:54:12 AM Report
Aww geez. this is so beautiful Jolen and James. I was hoping to hear
your voice too, not just Jolens..But thats ok. beautiful for sure.

Love you, Gay




Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on December 3, 2006 12:42:46 PM Report
Really enjoyed listening. It brings another dimension to the work.

Lovely

Ali x

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on November 25, 2006 05:33:07 AM Report
Aren't we just purrfect together. Always a pleasure to share something with you, princess.

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 17, 2006 07:49:16 PM Report
Jody, this is just awesome Lady! Congrats on the award, Joe
Comment By: TrialAnn on November 16, 2006 08:48:06 PM Report
I'll say it again, nice work and congrats sister!


Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on November 16, 2006 06:30:41 AM Report
WOW! This is outstanding. Your exquisitely chosen words of purpose, presented in beautiful rhythm, took me on a refreshing spiritual journey. Thanks.

Peace,

Randy

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on November 13, 2006 10:07:03 PM Report

Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds


Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 13, 2006 03:40:23 PM Report
I do remember reading this before and still appreciate your work.  Congrats on your award here.  Much deserved!
Comment By: FreeJeff on November 13, 2006 01:09:14 PM Report
great write...

Congrats on a much deserved award.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 13, 2006 01:04:14 PM Report
Oooooh about time!!!  Wonderful my J...  Congrats on the award!!!!! 
Love you! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 13, 2006 09:41:30 AM Report
CONGRATULATIONS, Little Witchling....
Such a perfected writing....as I witnessed before, and glad to see it made an award....
Good job.....

Just me, an ol' bag lady witch....

Comment By: FreeRoss McCague Rosco on October 24, 2006 09:24:59 PM Report
So glad to hear your voice. This is a fine reading. I've been waiting to hear one. Note perfect. There is much strength in your voice and the accent of the Empire. Thanks much, Ross.
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on September 26, 2006 09:16:28 PM Report
A very fine piece by you two.

Wonderful job!

Keith

Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on September 19, 2006 02:02:56 PM Report
Nice..well spoken...sexy and cool...im in looove..lol.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 18, 2006 08:53:22 PM Report
Enjoyed the audio.
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 12, 2006 03:59:03 AM Report
I have read this several times and derive a new meaning with each read. The best for me is...rising to honor a new day with new challenges and a new beginning. I enjoy a piece that allows me to take my own road through it. jp
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 21, 2006 10:02:33 PM Report
Beautifully tuned and presented, Jolen~!!  The chemistry between the two of you is vibrant and classic~!!  I loved the work, and you should be quite proud of your endeavor...

Margaret....

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on August 21, 2006 05:51:10 PM Report
I absolutely love this co-write, it has everything! Great flow , nice sentiment and a flawless rhyme meter. Just plain great Jody and James!!  Henry
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 21, 2006 04:18:38 PM Report
That 10th line kind of throws me, but I must say the write is full of imagery.  You two have done a good job together. 
Comment By: FreeChuck on August 18, 2006 04:45:15 PM Report

I like it… it reminds me of someone waking up and screwing their wife in the middle of the night… she probably slept through it… and that’s okay because so did he… very good to both of you.


Comment By: FreeAngel on August 16, 2006 05:20:43 PM Report
Brilliant write you two. Well done amazing

Love Angelxx

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 11, 2006 08:11:25 PM Report
When two things collide, there can only be a few outcomes...near perfection and limitless talent. The others, well, we won't bother discussing them...magnificent! BB.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 11, 2006 06:24:36 PM Report
Well, fortunately, I still have my breath..:O) Beautiful images and feeling, you two. It seems surrealistic to me. I won't pretend all the lines hang together for me in any logical order,but that may not be the intent. I get the impression a a sort of spiritual rebirth and the beginning of a vast journey. Rising to Honor blows right over my head, but many things do..:O)..yereverscratchinhisheadfurball
Comment By: Freetom on August 11, 2006 04:43:14 PM Report

magnificent and breathless penning Jody and James you two make awonderful teams displaying a vision that transend time and space excellent penning


handshakes and hugs kisses


tom


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 11, 2006 03:58:57 PM Report
All I can say is your both just breathless together a match with wisdom and words..  I must admit another one of your very best lovely lady...together your hearts beat as one..  ~ She
Comment By: AdminRichardM on August 11, 2006 12:40:32 PM Report
Beautiful, leaves me breathless, following the development and all the delight here. That last stanza seems so, so over the top. There's inspiration here, what a pair! Rich

Comment By: TrialAnn on August 11, 2006 11:10:45 AM Report
Wonderful effort by the both of you, simply beautiful.


Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on August 11, 2006 09:42:17 AM Report
Jolen, Jolen, Jolen, what am I going to do with you? I didn't touch your words, just followed your lead. If they are beautiful, which they are, then it is all you, flower, all you.
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 11, 2006 08:31:25 AM Report
The two of you write seamlessly together! I couldn't tell where one stopped and the other began, and that's how I love it (smiles)!

 

Awesome work, Jolen and James...What true poetry is all about...

Hugs

Glata

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 11, 2006 08:00:27 AM Report

Oh my J, and James...  WOW...  This is breathless stuff!  This is poetry!  This is BEAUTIFUL!!  I love it.  You two together make the most wonderful poetry...  Again, I can see elements of you my J, and elements of James in this, and it compliments each other wonderfully!!  My dear, this is not a collaborative effort between you and James, this is magic!!  This is a Leonardo da Vinci panting!!!  This is brilliant you two!!  I love it!
Adri x






 


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