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Author Name: Freeever_randy 3 Comments
Date Added: August 13, 2006 06:08:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Masked

The sun burned my eyes as it rose today,
The bright light of mourning, summoning tears.
While fear and sorrow holds all joy at bay.
I hide my pain in juvenile spheres.

No matter the facade my mask conveys,
Behind it, Iím nothing like what appears.
The mask covers me so I can portray
An unburdened soul before my peers.

Though Iím successful, I long to display
My true face and stop acting cavalier.
Will I still find success, opened this way?
I fear I will simply meet harsh sneers.

So my mourning rites, repeated each day,
Strangely ground me as my crowded mind clears.
Still, I need some form of relief, I pray
These burdens will lead to new frontiers.

I hate hiding, operating in stealth.
My wish? It's simply to be myself!

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 14, 2006 09:37:27 AM Report
Randy, This poem is very moving to my heart in a strange way... You have as they say hit the nail on the head... Great poem here.. I look forward to reading more of you.. Later  She
Comment By: FreeAdri on August 14, 2006 03:39:08 AM Report

I was astounded, now I am speechless...  Randy, this is phenomenal!!!  Your portrayal, your imagery, your honesty...  You are a real live poet!!!  Wonderful beyond words...
Adri x


Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on August 13, 2006 12:06:17 PM Report
Very interesting and deep write, I guess we all carry these burdens of self
doubt in different areas, I know I do.. we all have to overlook the
things we fear about and go for it anyway, hiding behind a mask is
something I can do well, I'm slowly learning that it feels so
invigorating to just remove that mask and feel raw emotions, it's not
easy - but then life is scary anyway, there's nothing like feeling
alive.



Jo x








 


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