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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: August 20, 2006 09:08:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Lost in the breeze

The night whispered to the lost breeze
as it lingered in the waiting silence
of the listening wet leaves

Call of the wild screamed at the trembling moon
that haunts the night with strangled threats
it gasp  for air to breath
 
 Leather curtains draped like a iron gate
of sparkling silver steel in the rain

Emerging purples and stretching night finger
that clutch at the night throat of overwhelming pain
 


 
 






~A Ponygirl Design~
pony girl /imiages/unchained melody/mid.loop4
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelique on August 20, 2006 04:53:54 PM Report
The day seems to find ways to distract a broken heart, but the night always leaves one alone with their thoughts. Your words make the reader's heart cry. Very sad indeed.
Comment By: FreeAngel on August 20, 2006 11:25:36 AM Report
Felt the anguish and lonliness in this write. Sad yet wonerful

 

 

Love Angelxxd

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on August 20, 2006 10:54:41 AM Report
Wow, India!  This was fantastic!  I especially loved how you worked sounds into this piece with Ss, Ls, Ts and short Es.  You drew me in from the first line.  I also liked how you placed the word wet in with the description of leaves...while it happens...I haven't really read a description like that before....again very nice!

 

CeeCee

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on August 20, 2006 09:49:16 AM Report
Hauntingly sad, yet beautifully penned sis. U did another great job of capturing the readers with your' words...Hugz...Tiger Rose
Comment By: FreeJoe on August 20, 2006 09:22:01 AM Report
A tormented soul crying out, bound and chained by lifes cruel ways. A haunted feeling it has.

Joe





 


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